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mephistobg · 01-03-2008, 15:24

xmsnevermind.deviantart.com/art/Beauty-Salon-Web-Design-78646319
this is the layout, and I really hope to hear some opinions cuz I`m not very sure about this design. tnx.

herkalees · 01-03-2008, 16:16

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mephistobg · 01-03-2008, 16:23

tnx man

Mongoose · 01-03-2008, 18:20

I love the colors and the striped background. You've got the style down. Work a bit on the layout, though. Experiment with different wants of displaying the content. It's not badly designed, just the content layout feels to generic for the good visuals.

mephistobg · 01-03-2008, 18:27

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Originally Posted by Mongoose

I love the colors and the striped background. You've got the style down. Work a bit on the layout, though. Experiment with different wants of displaying the content. It's not badly designed, just the content layout feels to generic for the good visuals.

first, thanks for answering
what do you mean by "feels to generic for the good visuals" sorry but english isn`t my best language

) Well if I get you right, you talk about text content?

Mongoose · 01-03-2008, 18:46

What I meant is that the text seems kinda plain and like it's "just there." Not a big thing. Try adding a bit of color to the "Location," "Phone Number," and "Internet" headings.

Maybe try a more lightweight font and bold a key sentence in every paragraph or so. You want someone to glance at the page and have the best content stand out, visually.

mephistobg · 01-03-2008, 18:56

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mongoose

What I meant is that the text seems kinda plain and like it's "just there." Not a big thing. Try adding a bit of color to the "Location," "Phone Number," and "Internet" headings.

Maybe try a more lightweight font and bold a key sentence in every paragraph or so. You want someone to glance at the page and have the best content stand out, visually.

well i agree with all that you said, but I also try to lighten up a little bit the text, well it became more hard to read because of the not white clean background, anyways I believe that there is compromise in that, I`ll try. 10x a lot man appreciate it.

Mongoose · 01-03-2008, 19:34

Yeah, I thought the lighter text might make it illegible. It was at least worth trying though, I'm sure. Good luck!

Shiro · 01-03-2008, 22:11

Its not going to be easy to get the text to follow that curve on the top left. Not impossible, but definitely some tricky coding.

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mephistobg Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 7	I really need your opinion, critics and advices for an experimental design xmsnevermind.deviantart.com/art/Beauty-Salon-Web-Design-78646319 this is the layout, and I really hope to hear some opinions cuz I`m not very sure about this design. tnx.

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01-03-2008, 16:23	#3 (permalink)
mephistobg Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 7	tnx man

01-03-2008, 18:20	#4 (permalink)
Mongoose Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Olympia, WA Posts: 150	I love the colors and the striped background. You've got the style down. Work a bit on the layout, though. Experiment with different wants of displaying the content. It's not badly designed, just the content layout feels to generic for the good visuals.

01-03-2008, 18:46	#6 (permalink)
Mongoose Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Olympia, WA Posts: 150	What I meant is that the text seems kinda plain and like it's "just there." Not a big thing. Try adding a bit of color to the "Location," "Phone Number," and "Internet" headings. Maybe try a more lightweight font and bold a key sentence in every paragraph or so. You want someone to glance at the page and have the best content stand out, visually.

01-03-2008, 19:34	#8 (permalink)
Mongoose Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Olympia, WA Posts: 150	Yeah, I thought the lighter text might make it illegible. It was at least worth trying though, I'm sure. Good luck!

01-03-2008, 22:11	#9 (permalink)
Shiro shiro Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Yokohama, Japan Posts: 2,660	Its not going to be easy to get the text to follow that curve on the top left. Not impossible, but definitely some tricky coding.

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