[hamsterfish]

Hey I just redid my online portfolio I have been using flash for only like 3 or 4 years on and off kind of new to it. I was just wondering what you think of it any suggestions. This was one of those template deals I payed only like $15 dollars on flashden.net and made it my own, a very good deal I think probably the best $15 I've spent. Thanks so much i really would appreciate any input!

here the link: hamsterfish.net
thanks again,
Brandon R.

[iblastoff]

so you want us to critique a template you bought?

[hamsterfish]

no. like the style and the overall feel?

[Hunch]

About me:

Hell o (sic) friends, family, people I know, and people I d on't (sic). I am Brandon R oegner (you seem to have a kerning problem with 'o' in body copy - font is fucked most likely). I am a designer, (sic) I try to make stuff lo ok (sic) pretty. I'm currently located in the portland (sic) area. I love Jesus and am trying to make a change in the world to better the quality of life in the world, (sic) I try to be a reflection of the one I love, Jesus.

And you expect this to get you work, hfamsterfish? I want you to reflect my company in your work, not some mythical religious figure.

[Shiro]

It looks ok, and moves smoothly. The thread academy pop-up was blocked by my pop-up blocker though, as I imagine it will be by other people's as well.

You should probably leave out the Jesus stuff though if you are hoping to drum up business. That would put me off hiring you right there.

[hamsterfish]

alright thanks for the input