Old 31-05-2007, 04:49   #1 (permalink)
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Just some C&C needed

Im pretty new to webdesign but ive made a few designs and have done some basic coding with HTML and tried some CSS although i can never seem to work CSS well because of both browsers coming into conflict. Anyways heres 2 of my latests works i just need some C,C on colours and stuff because im coloured blind with red and green
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[h]ttp://ic3.deviantart.com/fs16/f/2007/150/9/4/Website05_by_Mattoman.png
[h]ttp://fc01.deviantart.com/fs16/f/2007/150/0/7/Website04_by_Mattoman.png

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Old 31-05-2007, 06:28   #2 (permalink)
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Stripes for backgrounds sure are nice, but u don't have to use then everywhere! First of all, put content in the layout, only then u can see if your design is working. Second, don't use all the cool effect from other sites. Be minimal in the beginning, focus on content which u are representing. If you do layouts just for fun, chose web page u think that needs redesigning and use their content. Maybe u think that designing means making cool layouts, but the main goal is to represent content in the best way.

Those two examples u publish are crappy. U haven't define style, colors seem to be random - I think that u was just coping other sites, but u weren't successful.

Hope u don't resent, we were all rookies and we all went through phase of learning.
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Old 31-05-2007, 08:14   #3 (permalink)
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thanks for the words, however i came up with both of the designs myself the only thing i used from another website was the stippy lines effect on the background, and which effects are you referrering to? The graidents on text ect? or the rollover navigation. Thanks again
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Old 31-05-2007, 10:32   #4 (permalink)
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I'm not saying that you took something directly from other sites. U maybe like something (obvious stripes ...) and that u included it in your sites. I'm not saying that u can't check other sites and maybe gather some ideas, but use those effects only when needed.

Main problem (other than colors, shapes, ugly effects ...) is ur grid. U should put elements in some order. Look at your grid right now:
etelje.com/datoteke/dt_help_lines.jpg

See how many vertical lines I put there?

Go around the web, look at good designs - and ASK YOURSELF why is that.

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Old 31-05-2007, 18:37   #5 (permalink)
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Im unfamiliar as to what 'Grinds' are. What order exactly are you talking about? thanks again for taking the time. maybe you can post a Good design that i should look at.
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Old 31-05-2007, 18:56   #6 (permalink)
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Um dont try and do massively advanced stuff when you not familiar with tools and when you not familiar with design, as my teacher always taught me , learn by imitation, he also taught me to use tables, so from then i didnt listen to my teacher.

www.procodes.net/bluecodes

this is my latest design it is simple(1 image only the rest is just html(which is very messy in the css/ I have to fix it then it will be free for any one to use)

oh dang i seem to have gotten an extra div tag, that wasnt happening at home, hmm 1 tic, i thought i did add an extra one in earlyer. hmm
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Old 31-05-2007, 19:06   #7 (permalink)
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Ok if some one can fix that, I can not see any problems
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Old 31-05-2007, 23:52   #8 (permalink)
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Quote:
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Im unfamiliar as to what 'Grinds' are.

You and me both. I think he meant grid.

He's telling you that the elements on your page don't line up well, so you need to work on a simpler grid.
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Old 01-06-2007, 06:15   #9 (permalink)
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I'm sorry for the wrong word, but Firefox's spell checker was ot with it .

On site point there is a very good article about principles of web design:
sitepoint.com/article/principles-beautiful-web-design/

On third page there is a section about grids too:
sitepoint.com/article/principles-beautiful-web-design/3

I think thats enough for now
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Old 01-06-2007, 09:23   #10 (permalink)
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thanks again people. ill keep this in mind at my next attempt at somthing
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