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Muzjik · 24-02-2007, 16:31

Hi ever, i respect alot of you here, and iv been lurking these forums for quite a bit. I have decided to finally become a member here, hoping to learn alot from you guys!

I have been attempting to learn CSS and Html for some time, and i made a design for a business consulting page. Please critque harshly, i dont remind redoing parts or even the whole thing.

Here is the link:
diehrsystems[.]com

gk · 24-02-2007, 22:12

LOL, sorry i have this habit of subliminally inserting letters and reordering letter when i read them. and I just read "Diarrhea Systems"

Structure of the page and basic layout seem to work. but the colors header and overall design need alot more work before I would call it serious.

Muzjik · 24-02-2007, 22:41

So you are saying just redo the graphics? Or is the problem laying deeper in the site then that. I see what your saying though. Could you please elaborate?

skyrocket · 25-02-2007, 01:08

hola

good start but agree it needs a lot of work yet. the left nav links need a bit of design polish - they just look plain and stranded on their own at the side right now. you could do with a footer or some kind of nav at the bottom so that people can get around the site without scrolling all the way back up. add a doctype and validate to make sure you're building a 'well-formed' document. needs some pictures and a colour scheme as it's just bland at the moment. that'll do for starters...

Maerk · 25-02-2007, 07:15

Anti-aliasing... Unless the pixellated text is making a sort of statement?

Muzjik · 25-02-2007, 11:43

Ok, thanks everyone. Im going to make all these changes ( already changes the text and nav bar a bit ) thanks for ally our help. New changes will be done stat.

swiecki · 25-02-2007, 17:16

It looks O.K.

not the most innovative design i've ever seen, but I think it will work for whatever your purposes are.

Please turn on antialiasing in whatever image editing program you are using for the header!!!

refraction · 28-02-2007, 04:22

Its got a nice clean look, but not much content

wheedwacker · 03-03-2007, 14:54

The right nav is great.

Muzjik · 04-03-2007, 22:41

Yea, you think? i feel a bit of hostile sarcasm there.

24-02-2007, 16:31	#1 (permalink)
Muzjik Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 70	First Serious Webpage Hi ever, i respect alot of you here, and iv been lurking these forums for quite a bit. I have decided to finally become a member here, hoping to learn alot from you guys! I have been attempting to learn CSS and Html for some time, and i made a design for a business consulting page. Please critque harshly, i dont remind redoing parts or even the whole thing. Here is the link: diehrsystems[.]com

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Maerk Doodler. Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 1,348	Anti-aliasing... Unless the pixellated text is making a sort of statement? __________________ sreski & scrapbook.sreski

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24-02-2007, 22:12	#2 (permalink)
gk geek Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: *.everywhere Posts: 204	LOL, sorry i have this habit of subliminally inserting letters and reordering letter when i read them. and I just read "Diarrhea Systems" Structure of the page and basic layout seem to work. but the colors header and overall design need alot more work before I would call it serious.

24-02-2007, 22:41	#3 (permalink)
Muzjik Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 70	So you are saying just redo the graphics? Or is the problem laying deeper in the site then that. I see what your saying though. Could you please elaborate?

25-02-2007, 01:08	#4 (permalink)
skyrocket SkyRocket Design Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Chichester Posts: 538	hola good start but agree it needs a lot of work yet. the left nav links need a bit of design polish - they just look plain and stranded on their own at the side right now. you could do with a footer or some kind of nav at the bottom so that people can get around the site without scrolling all the way back up. add a doctype and validate to make sure you're building a 'well-formed' document. needs some pictures and a colour scheme as it's just bland at the moment. that'll do for starters...

25-02-2007, 11:43	#6 (permalink)
Muzjik Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 70	Ok, thanks everyone. Im going to make all these changes ( already changes the text and nav bar a bit ) thanks for ally our help. New changes will be done stat.

25-02-2007, 17:16	#7 (permalink)
swiecki Registered User Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 80	It looks O.K. not the most innovative design i've ever seen, but I think it will work for whatever your purposes are. Please turn on antialiasing in whatever image editing program you are using for the header!!!

28-02-2007, 04:22	#8 (permalink)
refraction ProjectPixel8 $refraction's Avatar$ Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: North east UK Posts: 47	Its got a nice clean look, but not much content

03-03-2007, 14:54	#9 (permalink)
wheedwacker competitionmaster 2.0 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: USA Posts: 1,335	The right nav is great.

04-03-2007, 22:41	#10 (permalink)
Muzjik Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 70	Yea, you think? i feel a bit of hostile sarcasm there.

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