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Narate · 22-01-2006, 09:15

Cant make up my mind

dan · 22-01-2006, 09:37

What is it? doesn't look very howies.

Narate · 22-01-2006, 10:21

uni project, its perhaps a little too 'experimental' but why not?

sean_r · 22-01-2006, 11:29

I agree with dan. It's nice, but the look is not very 'on brand'. The message is tho.

Are you doing it for the ycn brief?

Narate · 22-01-2006, 11:53

Yeh, I could explain to you why but I cant be bothered, but my tutors loved it.

I got a proper "See class can you see how this concept is working" off them.

You need not worry about the design, it was just the hand generated type I was worried about more then anythig else. Its hard to judge your own stuff.

dan · 22-01-2006, 14:34

I'm quite liking the lower page and agree if it's a uni project it doesn't have to be so on brand. But my question still stands, what is it? web site, flyers, bunch of promo cards. If it's a ycn brief can you link it?

Narate · 22-01-2006, 20:01

Its a website but the promo cards are pretty similar. Not following, are you asking me to link to the brief or asking if I am allowed to show the work?

datahound · 22-01-2006, 20:36

l like it a lot, very moderne

Brown · 22-01-2006, 21:14

does it say 'documenary' on purpose?

is your fullstop key broken?

rescued by flying skateboard dude.

Narate · 22-01-2006, 21:50

Suprised no one pointed that out yet. No its a typo. No.

Mik · 23-01-2006, 08:23

all over the shop if you ask me.

Alexanda · 23-01-2006, 08:26

the fat kid with the dodgy haircut on the front page looks a bit strange, perhaps use a skateboarder doing a trick?

gray · 23-01-2006, 08:27

hard to read that

nice wood

Narate · 23-01-2006, 10:01

haha everyone says he looks fat when really hes not at all. Must just be the shirt.

Ahh well it'll do for me. I only wanted the type looking at othewise I would of put it in showcase.

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22-01-2006, 09:37	#2 (permalink)
dan Iris Folder Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: smokey Posts: 2,650	What is it? doesn't look very howies.

22-01-2006, 10:21	#3 (permalink)
Narate Royalty™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester (UK) Posts: 3,273	uni project, its perhaps a little too 'experimental' but why not?

22-01-2006, 11:29	#4 (permalink)
sean_r Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: London Posts: 1,092	I agree with dan. It's nice, but the look is not very 'on brand'. The message is tho. Are you doing it for the ycn brief?

22-01-2006, 11:53	#5 (permalink)
Narate Royalty™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester (UK) Posts: 3,273	Yeh, I could explain to you why but I cant be bothered, but my tutors loved it. I got a proper "See class can you see how this concept is working" off them. You need not worry about the design, it was just the hand generated type I was worried about more then anythig else. Its hard to judge your own stuff.

22-01-2006, 14:34	#6 (permalink)
dan Iris Folder Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: smokey Posts: 2,650	I'm quite liking the lower page and agree if it's a uni project it doesn't have to be so on brand. But my question still stands, what is it? web site, flyers, bunch of promo cards. If it's a ycn brief can you link it?

22-01-2006, 20:01	#7 (permalink)
Narate Royalty™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester (UK) Posts: 3,273	Its a website but the promo cards are pretty similar. Not following, are you asking me to link to the brief or asking if I am allowed to show the work?

22-01-2006, 20:36	#8 (permalink)
datahound Spare Parts Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Bracknell Forest Posts: 5,131	l like it a lot, very moderne

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Brown volkswagen yellow & gold Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: london, england. Posts: 6,147	does it say 'documenary' on purpose? is your fullstop key broken? rescued by flying skateboard dude.

22-01-2006, 21:50	#10 (permalink)
Narate Royalty™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester (UK) Posts: 3,273	Suprised no one pointed that out yet. No its a typo. No.

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Mik Magazines™ Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Glasgow.. Posts: 11,860	all over the shop if you ask me.

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Alexanda European Champions 2008 Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 2,585	the fat kid with the dodgy haircut on the front page looks a bit strange, perhaps use a skateboarder doing a trick?

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gray i still want paying Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: newcastle, uk Posts: 4,836	hard to read that nice wood

23-01-2006, 10:01	#14 (permalink)
Narate Royalty™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester (UK) Posts: 3,273	haha everyone says he looks fat when really hes not at all. Must just be the shirt. Ahh well it'll do for me. I only wanted the type looking at othewise I would of put it in showcase.