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liquidfusion · 03-06-2005, 08:02

Recently finished this piece, tell me what you think..

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/19000259/

(click thumb for for full view)

Brown · 03-06-2005, 08:05

i dig. set as wallpaper.

taaaaaaaa.

Narate · 03-06-2005, 08:06

Dont like it sorry, far too trendy and totally meaningless. There is noway that image is a presentation of the balance, cause and affect behind Ying and Yang.

Technical ability is good though.

emil · 03-06-2005, 08:11

nice.

Narate · 03-06-2005, 08:27

Quote:

far too trendy and totally meaningless

haha Im a proper grumpy bastard today

Narate · 04-06-2005, 17:40

pgo · 04-06-2005, 22:43

I'd go with Narate, but I do like it. It is awful trendy and it's not really "abstract"...it's more..."concrete" or "literal" or "figurative" - it's definitely not abstract just because it uses shapes.

Well, the background is abstract - in that it's a meaningless menagerie of trendy circles and lines

. The subject (trees with birds) is definitely illustrative, figurative, concrete, and literal.

Feel free to throw out some more adjectives!

It's nice, though. I think it has excellent balance between positive/negative space and tonality. Ugh...former art student speak.

EDIT: On a second look, I'd love to see just the background - none of the black/white abstract shapes, no trees or birdies. Just that background.

Lovely...

A crude selection - MSPaint...

bag · 07-06-2005, 06:03

the black tree is the best bit... the rest sucks

adras · 07-06-2005, 13:41

its alright

MikeTC · 08-06-2005, 03:47

Keep it up lad! Good stuff

liquidfusion · 17-06-2005, 03:48

Quote:

Originally Posted by bag

the black tree is the best bit... the rest sucks

Well the white tree is just the black tree inverted, so u mean the trees are the best bit, i dont want 2 big myself up or anything, but its a bit harsh 2 say 'the rest sucks' cos the majority of feedback i have got not just from here has been positive :p

pgo · 17-06-2005, 05:26

I just think it's just not his "bag," baby.

weldo · 17-06-2005, 05:39

I like the trees too.... very oriental feel to them....

03-06-2005, 08:02	#1 (permalink)
liquidfusion Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 149	Abstract piece Recently finished this piece, tell me what you think.. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/19000259/ (click thumb for for full view)

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adras Zły Join Date: May 2004 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,001	its alright __________________ Be Crisp (tm)

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weldo now with added beard Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Liverpool Posts: 5,432	I like the trees too.... very oriental feel to them.... __________________ fuck signatures

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03-06-2005, 08:05	#2 (permalink)
Brown volkswagen yellow & gold Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: london, england. Posts: 6,147	i dig. set as wallpaper. taaaaaaaa.

03-06-2005, 08:06	#3 (permalink)
Narate Royalty™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester (UK) Posts: 3,242	Dont like it sorry, far too trendy and totally meaningless. There is noway that image is a presentation of the balance, cause and affect behind Ying and Yang. Technical ability is good though.

03-06-2005, 08:11	#4 (permalink)
emil dt immigrant Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bucharest - Romania Posts: 7,000	nice.

04-06-2005, 17:40	#6 (permalink)
Narate Royalty™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester (UK) Posts: 3,242	haha

04-06-2005, 22:43	#7 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	I'd go with Narate, but I do like it. It is awful trendy and it's not really "abstract"...it's more..."concrete" or "literal" or "figurative" - it's definitely not abstract just because it uses shapes. Well, the background is abstract - in that it's a meaningless menagerie of trendy circles and lines . The subject (trees with birds) is definitely illustrative, figurative, concrete, and literal. Feel free to throw out some more adjectives! It's nice, though. I think it has excellent balance between positive/negative space and tonality. Ugh...former art student speak. EDIT: On a second look, I'd love to see just the background - none of the black/white abstract shapes, no trees or birdies. Just that background. Lovely... A crude selection - MSPaint...

07-06-2005, 06:03	#8 (permalink)
bag ______ Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: London Posts: 186	the black tree is the best bit... the rest sucks

08-06-2005, 03:47	#10 (permalink)
MikeTC Senior Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Wirral / Chester Posts: 178	Keep it up lad! Good stuff

17-06-2005, 05:26	#12 (permalink)
pgo Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 12,340	I just think it's just not his "bag," baby.

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