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Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Southampton, UK
Posts: 36
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Headings look slightly on the large side. The text in the red box looks really strange centred and the font looks a little tacky. Overall design isn't that bad but it looks a bit messy in terms of composition, needs some tidying up. |
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Black & Proud
Join Date: May 2003
Posts: 3,275
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ah ok - that explains a few things (copy not saying what it should and headings not being consistant etc). as has been said - rollovers would be nice, so would a bit more speed when navigating. Watch your alignment of text/headings ('what do i need' section is especially bad) It all needs 'slickening' up a little and maybe the balance between the top/red/image bits and the content area needs looking at as it seems like the main body of information is being pushed into second place. Maybe try using the top/red/image section a bit more intuitively? The whole thing works well as a prototype though. |
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