[phoenixfireball]

Hey all, my first post is here after reading the wonderful critiques and notes written by all the great members at this forum.

I was wondering what you all think of what I have done for my site.

Current: www.phoenixrealm.com
New: www.phoenixrealm.com/prnew

Anything that you could say may help me in my progression. I am sorry not all of the pages are complete, but as time passes, they will be completed and more up to date critiques can be left.

Thanks for your time,
David