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Old 20-12-2004, 13:48   #1 (permalink)
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Simple personal site - Critique please...

Just a simple site I have put together as a repository to showcase my broadcast design work. There are still a few issues with it at the moment, but the design is essentially done.

Thanks for any comments/criticisms or suggestions.....

www.gfxmoo.com
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Old 21-12-2004, 09:14   #2 (permalink)
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really nice imagery, just needs to be taken a step further, looks like way to much thought has gone into what the picture on the left looks like and not enough thought into the actuall website its self.

good start though.
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Old 21-12-2004, 12:09   #3 (permalink)
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true point.

Your work is really good, but i don't think your site really reflects the type or quality of work. I reckon a more futuristic layout would go hand in hand with your 3D stuff. Bit like this maybe:

http://www.realityslip.com/

Maybe not as overly futuristic, but dya get the idea?
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Old 21-12-2004, 12:19   #4 (permalink)
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Pat - these styles you are showing us are really dated.
No one in there right mind does work like that anymore.
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Old 21-12-2004, 12:35   #5 (permalink)
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blip, blip blip, whiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiizzzzz, bling, goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.

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Old 21-12-2004, 12:46   #6 (permalink)
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Old 21-12-2004, 13:09   #7 (permalink)
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thx

thx for the critz so far

C4d: I am not done completely,...BUT it will still be a very simple site....just a place to put my work....will be taken 'further'...but not too much :-)

Pat - Must agree with the other post,....realityslip style stuff is way dated. It woulda' blown me away 3 years ago but not now.
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