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stealthcow · 08-12-2004, 09:24

http://www.thomasbowler.com/primecare

A concept for prime care vision... their logo will be incorporated on the top right (just a placeholder at the minute) and i want to include some vector type images to enhance the feeling that the site is about eye care

but any comments so far?

cheers

Mr Fred · 08-12-2004, 09:32

Its really bright and your promoting eyecare? - good call.
Also its cliched to the max.

can't believe I said max.

oli · 08-12-2004, 09:38

tone those colours right down, sort out the dodgy font, make up which way your going with the diagonal lines, draw a proper arrow for the little boxes rather than using the ' > ' key. Get a relevant stock photo, too cheesy.

My 50p.

lucidcreations · 08-12-2004, 10:11

well spent

Alaska-Design · 09-12-2004, 10:24

It'll be nice with work

stealthcow · 10-12-2004, 17:28

will take all of your comments into account and make the changes, and i agree with toning down the colours and making the lines uniform

thanks!

stealthcow · 10-12-2004, 17:29

oh, and on the comment about it being cliched - exactly the look the client was looking for

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stealthcow knocking heads Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: London, UK Posts: 1,914	Primecare Vision http://www.thomasbowler.com/primecare A concept for prime care vision... their logo will be incorporated on the top right (just a placeholder at the minute) and i want to include some vector type images to enhance the feeling that the site is about eye care but any comments so far? cheers

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lucidcreations Part of the 3 out of 4 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: cheshire Posts: 2,079	well spent __________________ Jase

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08-12-2004, 09:32	#2 (permalink)
Mr Fred Magazines™ Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Glasgow.. Posts: 11,354	Its really bright and your promoting eyecare? - good call. Also its cliched to the max. can't believe I said max.

08-12-2004, 09:38	#3 (permalink)
oli I Call Shenanigans™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester, England. Posts: 9,740	tone those colours right down, sort out the dodgy font, make up which way your going with the diagonal lines, draw a proper arrow for the little boxes rather than using the ' > ' key. Get a relevant stock photo, too cheesy. My 50p.

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stealthcow knocking heads Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: London, UK Posts: 1,914	will take all of your comments into account and make the changes, and i agree with toning down the colours and making the lines uniform thanks!

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stealthcow knocking heads Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: London, UK Posts: 1,914	oh, and on the comment about it being cliched - exactly the look the client was looking for

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