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Old 02-09-2004, 02:15   #1 (permalink)
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Graphinence Australia / Works of dAKAPU

Hello,

I spent for that six months.

http://www.graphinence.com/

Thank you.
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Old 02-09-2004, 03:35   #2 (permalink)
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Will you please to write comments ?
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Old 02-09-2004, 04:02   #3 (permalink)
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this is a predominantly UK forum. how about giving people time to get out of bed?
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Old 02-09-2004, 04:23   #4 (permalink)
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I don't push anybody but I forgot to ask what I want. Smallbeer how about give me some comments about my website ?
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Old 02-09-2004, 05:04   #5 (permalink)
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well, I'm not too keen.

although the large sccene image is very immersive, reality soon strikes home when the characters actions replay over and over far too noticeably (the guy on the left constantly pointing to the ceiling and the guy carrying out the same brush stroke repeatedly were the worst offenders for me) and once I start looking at the content, the screens that come up are far too flat. either I'm looking at a screen or I'm in the room - you've got to decide which one.

I would have prefered it to be much more explorative, otherwise the scene in front of me is just self indulgence on your part.

as it is at the moment, one content screen needs to close as another opens otherwise it gets far too messy.

The background image of the outlines of the beams doesn't line up with the colour scene.

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Old 02-09-2004, 05:06   #6 (permalink)
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whoa! real people! wow that is so cool! How did you get those animation (people)? You made them yourself? But six months? What took you that long?
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Old 02-09-2004, 05:43   #7 (permalink)
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Initially the site looks interesting, I think most people will be prepared to have a look around the site.
But once you begin to use the site it dissapoints, I think most people would expect some interaction with the animated elements.
It also seems a bit odd that there are no reflections on the glossy floorboards.

The windows that pop up float over each other in an awkward way, that can make the interface appear messy. It would also be nice to have a bit of information about each of the sites featured in the portfolio section.
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Old 02-09-2004, 05:46   #8 (permalink)
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yeah, i actually expected I can click those monitors, or anything in the background. Navigation seem to be so simple in my opinion. but the design rox ^_^
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Old 02-09-2004, 05:47   #9 (permalink)
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yeh nice at first, but messy when you use it. and get some interaction in!

loads v fast though, good potential
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Old 02-09-2004, 05:51   #10 (permalink)
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but the design rox ^_^
design is not just how it looks.
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Old 02-09-2004, 06:01   #11 (permalink)
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oh lol yeah, sorry about that.
I noticed too that it loads fast.. O.o what's the size of his flash BTW.. impressive...
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Old 02-09-2004, 11:19   #12 (permalink)
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i like it... fits nicely on 1280x1024

easy enough to navigate, but i think it would be more exciting if you went through the building as you were going to different sections, maybe zoom in one of the groups of people and have them tell you things about the section you're in
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Old 02-09-2004, 11:22   #13 (permalink)
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i also dont like the way the menus appear over each other, only one should be open at a time

i think the reason people are giving you these sort of comments is that they see you have a lot of talent and are trying to squeeze every last drop out of you, so dont get disheartened!
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Old 02-09-2004, 11:28   #14 (permalink)
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I think that this site has a very original concept, great job dude.
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Old 02-09-2004, 11:38   #15 (permalink)
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good work young man. i agree that the content areas need to dissapear when a new one opens and i also feel about the screen with my pointer for interaction, howver, the fact that there isn't any does not come accross as a bad thing.

well done, you also made me read the words - not often that i do that. although english might not be your first language, if you're going to use it on the site, get someone to check through the copy for you - some of it reads a little disjointed - can be off putting.

icons a little bit osx maybe?

well done.
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Old 02-09-2004, 11:57   #16 (permalink)
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This is so almost perfect!

Great creativity there. We need more original designs out there like these. Creativity is sorely lacking these days.

Great stuff.

Disappointing is the most accurate word to describe the navigation after the initial "opening."
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Old 02-09-2004, 12:21   #17 (permalink)
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Why has he not answered all your comments yet? I grow impatient to know his views on your views
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Old 02-09-2004, 12:24   #18 (permalink)
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he's in australia. in bed.
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Old 02-09-2004, 12:27   #19 (permalink)
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but that was no excuse for us...
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Old 02-09-2004, 12:33   #20 (permalink)
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That is because we don't live in Australia.
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