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ionicwings · 31-08-2004, 08:55

Hello,

I did this flash presentation for my friend way back highschool (this is actually the third one, and the smallest one in filesize). This is for his report in his University. The report is not formal so I made a "disco" theme. He and his group got a perfect score in their project report. No, I am not saying this is sooo good, maybe their professor just got mesmerized by the dancing girl. BTW, i ddnt made the dancing girl, I just got it from flashkit.com. I mentioned it in my blog in my site and I am not claiming I created it.

What do I need? I need criticisms, comments or any reactions you may want to express. I need this for improvement. What do I lack and what do I need to improve into. Thank you very much.

The file is almost 5MB in .swf/compressed zip format.
Click Here to download the presentation.

Here's the screenshot of the presentation:

Thanks!

Damion · 31-08-2004, 09:17

mad flash! Too fast! can't keep up with it!

JiRaffe · 31-08-2004, 09:46

not a good idea to stretch to fullscreen when you have bitmap images in the presentation. rather than having a large audio file in the background, have something smaller and loop it. would massively reduce the file size (if you were ever considering putting it online).

lucidcreations · 31-08-2004, 09:47

didnt really get what it was about. Also you might wanna try a bit of a trade off by reducing music sound quality and up the image quality.

ionicwings · 31-08-2004, 11:23

The presentation is actually a series of pictures of their group doing some kind of motor rewinding. The images btw were given to me in low resolutions already. Yeah, I should have maintained the size of the images and not enlarged them. About the music, you are right that I should have cut the music (the first part) and loop it, good idea. Thanks for the input. I'll do better next time. ^_^

31-08-2004, 08:55	#1 (permalink)
ionicwings (^---^)\m/ Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Philippines Posts: 57	Flash Presentation Hello, I did this flash presentation for my friend way back highschool (this is actually the third one, and the smallest one in filesize). This is for his report in his University. The report is not formal so I made a "disco" theme. He and his group got a perfect score in their project report. No, I am not saying this is sooo good, maybe their professor just got mesmerized by the dancing girl. BTW, i ddnt made the dancing girl, I just got it from flashkit.com. I mentioned it in my blog in my site and I am not claiming I created it. What do I need? I need criticisms, comments or any reactions you may want to express. I need this for improvement. What do I lack and what do I need to improve into. Thank you very much. The file is almost 5MB in .swf/compressed zip format. Click Here to download the presentation. Here's the screenshot of the presentation: Thanks!

31-08-2004, 09:46	#3 (permalink)
JiRaffe Ur mother's ur brother? Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Liverpool Posts: 880	not a good idea to stretch to fullscreen when you have bitmap images in the presentation. rather than having a large audio file in the background, have something smaller and loop it. would massively reduce the file size (if you were ever considering putting it online). __________________ ::: TC Magazine :::

31-08-2004, 09:47	#4 (permalink)
lucidcreations Part of the 3 out of 4 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: cheshire Posts: 2,077	didnt really get what it was about. Also you might wanna try a bit of a trade off by reducing music sound quality and up the image quality. __________________ Jase

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31-08-2004, 09:17	#2 (permalink)
Damion I ain't afraid of no post Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Bradford, Uk Posts: 416	mad flash! Too fast! can't keep up with it!

31-08-2004, 11:23	#5 (permalink)
ionicwings (^---^)\m/ Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Philippines Posts: 57	The presentation is actually a series of pictures of their group doing some kind of motor rewinding. The images btw were given to me in low resolutions already. Yeah, I should have maintained the size of the images and not enlarged them. About the music, you are right that I should have cut the music (the first part) and loop it, good idea. Thanks for the input. I'll do better next time. ^_^

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