Old 24-08-2004, 10:47   #1 (permalink)
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jump out a plane

just doing a logo for my uni sky diving club, any suggestions for a good font? i dont like the current typography

any comments on the design will be welcome as well
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Old 24-08-2004, 11:11   #2 (permalink)
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Comic Sans?
Seriously, the logo seems a bit unbalanced to me. Maybe it's the long arms. A bit unpractical as well. Hmm... Vary the whitespace between the orange guy and the blue sky. Shift the "hull university" a bit left maybe.
The guy and arrow symbols are really powerful, but they clash with the roundness of the cloud. But it could just be me.
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Old 24-08-2004, 11:15   #3 (permalink)
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might just scrap the clouds!

cheers for the comments, will make improvements
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Old 24-08-2004, 11:25   #4 (permalink)
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Keep the clouds - lose the arrow
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Old 24-08-2004, 12:19   #5 (permalink)
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you'll have someones eye out with that
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Old 24-08-2004, 12:48   #6 (permalink)
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i hate sky diving. this was taken the last time i went:



i thought i'd pissed my self when we landed.

i say landed. the bloke on top of me landed. i just fell to the ground crying.

sigh.
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Old 24-08-2004, 12:56   #7 (permalink)
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there anything you dont do, action man ?
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Old 24-08-2004, 12:57   #8 (permalink)
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don't jump out of planes no more. fuck that.
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Old 24-08-2004, 13:00   #9 (permalink)
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Wouldnt mind giving it a go, probably shit myself though.
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Old 24-08-2004, 13:04   #10 (permalink)
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it should be on your list of things to do once.

clue's at the end of the sentence.
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Old 24-08-2004, 13:05   #11 (permalink)
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agree, arrow pointing down seems dynamic... powerful...
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you'll have someones eye out with that
also agree... work those T-2000 arms out...
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Old 24-08-2004, 13:07   #12 (permalink)
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I'm shit-scared of heights. but i do want to try parachuting.
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Old 24-08-2004, 13:09   #13 (permalink)
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Disgree: that arrow just looks silly to me...

Maybe if the whole blue bit was the arrow, that'd work for me. But it just looks to small to me.
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Old 24-08-2004, 15:48   #14 (permalink)
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get rid of the arrow, it doesn't fit.
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Old 24-08-2004, 17:45   #15 (permalink)
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Deffo lose the arrow. Maybe make the blue sky a bit more sky blue.
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Old 24-08-2004, 17:53   #16 (permalink)
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Arrow good, wings need taming in my opinion. My mum went to Hull, is it better than it was?
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