Old 19-08-2004, 06:01   #1 (permalink)
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What do you think of...?

Hi all,
I've only just came across this forum on my travels through the world wide wonderland .
It looks pretty good, there are some very helpful people here!

Anyways, I've been working on a site on and off for a while now and only recently hosted it online. I'm not quite sure of what direction to take it in (more tutorials, more tools, a blog or something).
I'm not planning to make a profit of it or anything, but would really like people to use it!

So, what do you think of it, check out the colour styles on the bottom right and let me know what one is best!



Thank you

www.heaphydesigns.comwww.HeaphyDesigns.com
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Old 19-08-2004, 06:26   #2 (permalink)
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The opening paragraph, under the "HeaphyDesigns.com" header, should ideally explain what the site is about, or what service you are offering instead of the cliched and useless "You can navigate throughout the site via the navigation bar on the top", etc.

Not much to say about the design, it looks like a pre-made 'out the box' number.

Some decent generic beginner level webdev content you've got, if you're looking for direction i'd continue with that, I think a blog would be out of place

As for styles, default sits best with me


Oh, and welcome to the forum
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Old 19-08-2004, 06:49   #3 (permalink)
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Borders, borders, borders. Too many gradients, reminds me of Windows 95. Red on dark grey in the nav (hover) is definitely not readable. Not well balanced at the top. Holes in A and P (logo) have a different colour than the background. What's "stored pages?". Why do I see webmaster links? I know what browser I have. Why do I need a clock in the status bar?

What's it for?

No offense, because technically it's well done (except you could have used CSS instead of tables), and it shows a great start. But right now, it doesn't impress me.
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Old 19-08-2004, 06:53   #4 (permalink)
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No offense, because technically it's well done (except you could have used CSS instead of tables), and it shows a great start. But right now, it doesn't impress me.

like i said, i'm quite sure it's a premade system, something like phpnuke
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Old 19-08-2004, 07:59   #5 (permalink)
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LOL! No, its not a premade system. I made it all myself, via Notepad, then upgraded to HTML Kit

I really do appreciate all this feedback by the way.

I'll make stored pages and webmaster links more clearly explained.

Keep it coming!
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Old 19-08-2004, 10:54   #6 (permalink)
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too many boxes. Visually the site is not very appealing.
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Old 19-08-2004, 12:50   #7 (permalink)
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What do you think of me removing the boxes then completely, a more simple table border then?
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Old 19-08-2004, 12:53   #8 (permalink)
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remove the borders, make the main bg color white (and not gray) , and seperate the different sections by padding, and margins, I think that would look much better.
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Old 19-08-2004, 12:56   #9 (permalink)
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Does look like phpnuke.

And you say using CSS "..will increase loading time considerably".
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Old 19-08-2004, 13:00   #10 (permalink)
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Yeah, in my experience it has done. What I was saying was using CSS over images to format colours et cetera does load the page quicker.... perhaps I should make that clearer

What is PHPNuke?
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Old 19-08-2004, 13:03   #11 (permalink)
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using CSS over images to format colours et cetera does load the page quicker
So it decreases loading time?
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Old 19-08-2004, 13:05   #12 (permalink)
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Yeah

/Feels self being reeled in.
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Old 19-08-2004, 16:40   #13 (permalink)
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What is PHPNuke?

I linked to it earlier.

I'm surprised you don't know what it is, as your site is pretty much a replica of a phpnuke site.
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Old 20-08-2004, 05:51   #14 (permalink)
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So it decreases loading time?


Oh crap!!

I only now just saw what you are getting at! I cannot believe I wrote that!!! Jeez, I better correct that right away

Cheers, Stickman!
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Old 20-08-2004, 05:54   #15 (permalink)
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I linked to it earlier.

I'm surprised you don't know what it is, as your site is pretty much a replica of a phpnuke site.

It's funny, some other people have mentioned that it looks like a PHPNuke, and that I must have edited to make it look similar to others!

Edit: Wow, I just looked here, its freaky how alike that site looks! Even the poll is there!

I wrote my site using notepad, then used HTML Kit. I only recently converted all the content to PHP, so I could then avail of the #include facility (as I have lots of the same table cells occuring over many pages).
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Old 20-08-2004, 06:00   #16 (permalink)
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