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KrisMarissens · 22-09-2008, 04:25

I'm finishing a roll-up banner and I'm not sure which version (images attached) to choose.
In the desaturated version (1) i think the concept stands out a bit more, but I'm not sure about the colours...

Your input is most welcome...
Kris

Kemp · 22-09-2008, 05:06

prefer number 1, however I don't like the way your text is aligned

Cixxy · 22-09-2008, 05:08

desaturated.
not sure about the white text in the vertical middle, .. maybe that needs more work.

KrisMarissens · 22-09-2008, 05:30

Thanks. I removed the trailing dots and centered the tagline. The italics might not improve legibility but it adds to the explanatory character.

John Good · 22-09-2008, 05:52

check your curves, the girl's hair is getting green/yellow

KrisMarissens · 22-09-2008, 05:57

On the other hand it might become a fashion trend...
Thanks, will check.

steveb · 22-09-2008, 06:02

I prefer the one where the pages in the book are white and not yellow.

Kemp · 22-09-2008, 06:04

why not have a monochromatic channel mixer layer above the normal colour photo and set opactiy to around 30%

KrisMarissens · 22-09-2008, 06:09

Quote:

Originally Posted by steveb

I prefer the one where the pages in the book are white and not yellow.

Thx for pointing that out. Will definitely keep an eye on those pages, whichever version makes it to the shop...

22-09-2008, 04:25	#1 (permalink)
KrisMarissens or just Kris Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Brussels - Belgium Posts: 123	Help me pick one please I'm finishing a roll-up banner and I'm not sure which version (images attached) to choose. In the desaturated version (1) i think the concept stands out a bit more, but I'm not sure about the colours... Your input is most welcome... Kris Attached Thumbnails

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Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	prefer number 1, however I don't like the way your text is aligned __________________ www.kempo1987.deviantart.com

22-09-2008, 05:30	#4 (permalink)
KrisMarissens or just Kris Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Brussels - Belgium Posts: 123	Thanks. I removed the trailing dots and centered the tagline. The italics might not improve legibility but it adds to the explanatory character. Attached Thumbnails

22-09-2008, 05:52	#5 (permalink)
John Good + Join Date: May 2005 Location: Tropical Networks Posts: 1,605	check your curves, the girl's hair is getting green/yellow __________________ Fonts are like cologne: A bad choice speaks louder than a good one. Justin Feinstein

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steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 5,476	I prefer the one where the pages in the book are white and not yellow. __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

22-09-2008, 05:08	#3 (permalink)
Cixxy Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 318	desaturated. not sure about the white text in the vertical middle, .. maybe that needs more work.

22-09-2008, 05:57	#6 (permalink)
KrisMarissens or just Kris Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Brussels - Belgium Posts: 123	On the other hand it might become a fashion trend... Thanks, will check.

22-09-2008, 06:04	#8 (permalink)
Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	why not have a monochromatic channel mixer layer above the normal colour photo and set opactiy to around 30% __________________ www.kempo1987.deviantart.com

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