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mattbl34 · 14-09-2008, 16:51

Hey,

So I am now working on a flyer. What advice do you have for this? It is to promote a contest sponsored by Vewd.org

It is a 4x6 flyer, printed on gloss paper. Front is on left, back on right. I'm not very happy with it but I feel like I'm on the right track.

Nilas · 14-09-2008, 17:04

wow, thats just messy.

start rearranging it all again, hint: grid.

And i dont think you need to use the logo font all over he place, let the logo sand out for itself.

mattbl34 · 14-09-2008, 17:41

This was another option for the front:

You are certainly right about the grid on the backside and the font.

I'll post another version soon.

moloyebu · 14-09-2008, 19:37

That's an amazing photograph! I would certainly pick that up if I seen it lying around

mattbl34 · 14-09-2008, 22:29

Alright,

We've been working on it. Changed some things. I'm not doing the designing, but he's bouncing it all off me.

Right now the two things I have in mind are to do something useful with the top right of the back side (right side of the graphic) and to increase the thickness of the implied line down the middle.

Any suggestions?

Nilas · 15-09-2008, 08:21

the front is good.

wouldnt center the text like that on the back.

CharmingMan · 15-09-2008, 08:27

all over the shop, you havent exerted the least bit of control over your lettering im afraid.

my advice is, use one font, one size in one colour. See if you can express a hierachrcy simply through postiion and layout

mrblack · 19-09-2008, 05:58

Maybe try aligning the back text to the right and using some other faint element to tie the left side together with it?

Front looks good!

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mattbl34 Registered User Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 54	Flyer and brand, continued Hey, So I am now working on a flyer. What advice do you have for this? It is to promote a contest sponsored by Vewd.org It is a 4x6 flyer, printed on gloss paper. Front is on left, back on right. I'm not very happy with it but I feel like I'm on the right track.

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CharmingMan Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 2,019	all over the shop, you havent exerted the least bit of control over your lettering im afraid. my advice is, use one font, one size in one colour. See if you can express a hierachrcy simply through postiion and layout __________________ Big Mouth Strikes Again

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14-09-2008, 17:04	#2 (permalink)
Nilas Super rvlvr. Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 329	wow, thats just messy. start rearranging it all again, hint: grid. And i dont think you need to use the logo font all over he place, let the logo sand out for itself.

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mattbl34 Registered User Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 54	This was another option for the front: You are certainly right about the grid on the backside and the font. I'll post another version soon.

14-09-2008, 19:37	#4 (permalink)
moloyebu Baboom Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 257	That's an amazing photograph! I would certainly pick that up if I seen it lying around

14-09-2008, 22:29	#5 (permalink)
mattbl34 Registered User Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 54	Alright, We've been working on it. Changed some things. I'm not doing the designing, but he's bouncing it all off me. Right now the two things I have in mind are to do something useful with the top right of the back side (right side of the graphic) and to increase the thickness of the implied line down the middle. Any suggestions?

15-09-2008, 08:21	#6 (permalink)
Nilas Super rvlvr. Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 329	the front is good. wouldnt center the text like that on the back.

19-09-2008, 05:58	#8 (permalink)
mrblack Registered User Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 22	Maybe try aligning the back text to the right and using some other faint element to tie the left side together with it? Front looks good!

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