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jeffc · 28-08-2008, 02:01

Working on a new business card and would love some feedback.

I'd like to keep it consistent with the website, (10voltmedia dot com)
At the moment, I'm leaning more toward #2...

thanks

steveb · 28-08-2008, 05:14

Very attractive. I was wondering what the little skulls represent - and then I recognised US electric sockets!

chazthetic · 28-08-2008, 08:59

I don't see much of a difference between the two except for the sockets down below too. I like the first one better I think.

Limbo · 28-08-2008, 09:14

Margins/Size of 2nd, layout 1st.

Both Ok by the cityscape is overkill imo - is it meaningful in a way that your (potential) clients will understand?

Pugsley · 28-08-2008, 09:52

Agree with limbo about layout margins etc. Also feel the cityscape doesn't add anything to it. The little bush on the front is OK but i like a bit of bush. he he

TeZ · 28-08-2008, 10:00

For me its number 2. I would lessen then city or get rid.

Coops · 28-08-2008, 10:01

Not fussed.

Liam · 28-08-2008, 10:20

It looks like Chicago, if I'm correct then it did it's job. I like it.

fasterthanlight · 28-08-2008, 12:46

The second version has better balance on the front of the card,

but the back of the card in the first version feels.... right

jeffc · 28-08-2008, 13:10

Wow, thanks for all the feedback.

Quote:

Originally Posted by chazthetic

I don't see much of a difference between the two except for the sockets down below too. I like the first one better I think.

Correct - just the bush placement, the socket on the back and some minor margins for the back type.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Limbo

Both Ok by the cityscape is overkill imo - is it meaningful in a way that your (potential) clients will understand?

Yeah, check out the website - www 10voltmedia dot com. Trying to stick very close to that and stay consistent.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coops

Not fussed.

Defintiely not, this is still in early stages.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Liam

It looks like Chicago...

Correct

I'll reduce the cityscape, although I just noticed that it's size in the 1st layout is totally wacked. It's not supposed to butt up to the top, just got mucked up when I pasted it in for the jpg.

jeffc · 28-08-2008, 14:45

Here's a slightly revised version with the correct sizing/margins and a smaller skyline. Still too big or does this feel better?

Der Burg · 28-08-2008, 18:37

I like the business card, but I'm not keen on the logo at all. Looks really amateur.

jeffc · 28-08-2008, 18:40

Quote:

Originally Posted by Der Burg

I like the business card, but I'm not keen on the logo at all. Looks really amateur.

Thanks - but the logo is done and out there. Not something I'll be changing any time soon.

Der Burg · 29-08-2008, 07:09

That's fair enough. Other than that then, I don't think there's much that can be improved. Ties in with the website nicely, I'd say it's done.

28-08-2008, 02:01	#1 (permalink)
jeffc Registered User Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Chicago Posts: 18	crit please - new biz card Working on a new business card and would love some feedback. I'd like to keep it consistent with the website, (10voltmedia dot com) At the moment, I'm leaning more toward #2... thanks Attached Thumbnails

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steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 5,476	Very attractive. I was wondering what the little skulls represent - and then I recognised US electric sockets! __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

28-08-2008, 09:14	#4 (permalink)
Limbo Another turn. Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 5,980	Margins/Size of 2nd, layout 1st. Both Ok by the cityscape is overkill imo - is it meaningful in a way that your (potential) clients will understand? __________________ CSS Search Engine

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Pugsley L'me at'em. L'me at'em. Join Date: May 2007 Location: Aberdeen, Scotland Posts: 2,884	Agree with limbo about layout margins etc. Also feel the cityscape doesn't add anything to it. The little bush on the front is OK but i like a bit of bush. he he __________________ If your colours are starting to run, let them all run, run away from you. Flux - Bloc Party Design Never Dies Currently Has: 26 "Keeping it Real" Points, 1 bonus point for being Sexy and a sea urchin.

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TeZ At the end of production. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxford Posts: 1,217	For me its number 2. I would lessen then city or get rid. __________________ Happiness By the Kilowatt Forever one more "Keeping it Real" Point, to whatever Pugsley has.

28-08-2008, 08:59	#3 (permalink)
chazthetic Fucking Awesome Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Orlando, Fl Posts: 524	I don't see much of a difference between the two except for the sockets down below too. I like the first one better I think.

28-08-2008, 10:01	#7 (permalink)
Coops Pops. Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 3,833	Not fussed.

28-08-2008, 10:20	#8 (permalink)
Liam Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Manchester Posts: 629	It looks like Chicago, if I'm correct then it did it's job. I like it. __________________ Flickr

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fasterthanlight MANBEARPIG Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Toronto Posts: 1,633	The second version has better balance on the front of the card, but the back of the card in the first version feels.... right __________________ Maybe Tomorrow's Ashes theFacelessFew deviantArtz

28-08-2008, 14:45	#11 (permalink)
jeffc Registered User Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Chicago Posts: 18	Here's a slightly revised version with the correct sizing/margins and a smaller skyline. Still too big or does this feel better? Attached Thumbnails

28-08-2008, 18:37	#12 (permalink)
Der Burg Trademark™ Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: South Yorkshire Posts: 78	I like the business card, but I'm not keen on the logo at all. Looks really amateur.

29-08-2008, 07:09	#14 (permalink)
Der Burg Trademark™ Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: South Yorkshire Posts: 78	That's fair enough. Other than that then, I don't think there's much that can be improved. Ties in with the website nicely, I'd say it's done.

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