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Old 15-08-2008, 00:48   #1 (permalink)
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New Website Design - Critiques

I haven't gotten to adding any content/functionality yet, but I'd like to know what you guys think of the design/logo.

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Old 15-08-2008, 00:51   #2 (permalink)
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could be good with some alignment
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Old 15-08-2008, 00:53   #3 (permalink)
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also, the lightning bolt looks like an n
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Old 15-08-2008, 00:56   #4 (permalink)
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Hmmm yeah I guess I skewed it a bit too much....and what do you mean by alignment?
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Old 15-08-2008, 01:00   #5 (permalink)
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look into grids, just google it. everything needs some sort of order, yours is almost there but things like the header to the content arent aligned. the header isnt in the center of the page
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Old 15-08-2008, 01:36   #6 (permalink)
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Well, yeah I know what alignment/grids are but I didn't know what you were referring to....

And I still don't. The header is in the center of the page. Try resizing your browser's width to something really small and you'll see that it stays in the center. If not, then I have no idea what's going on but "margin: 0 auto" has never failed me before.
If anything, maybe the different widths of the two columns give the illusion of it not being centered.
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Old 15-08-2008, 03:01   #7 (permalink)
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Resize the content boxes that read "under construction" (Make them larger so there's not as much white space ). The weight of the page is left heavy from the smaller of the two boxes, so even that out Also, using Safari the color of the background is lighter than the logo background, throwing the color off, but it's fine in firefox. The footer can also be lowered quite a bit to fill in that gray block at the bottom. I like the minimalism and simplicity, keep working on it.
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Old 15-08-2008, 03:36   #8 (permalink)
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There's too much of a gap between the boxes.

A crap criticism, but what do you expect when you post something up so early in the design process...
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Old 15-08-2008, 12:45   #9 (permalink)
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there's not much to critique, but the header looks nice.
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Old 15-08-2008, 12:56   #10 (permalink)
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it must just be because your content ands the other container arent centered. i think the main content extends much further from the edge of the logo than the sub content does? just move them both across a bit
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