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Paul · 13-08-2008, 15:50

can I get a some crit on this, simple blog/ folio
link removed

mucho gracias

Limbo · 13-08-2008, 16:12

Not bad.

Lacks a little hierarchy - well on the homepage at least.

The Logo isn't to my taste, it lumbers about up their like a really tall kid at a school disco.

Do Gooder · 13-08-2008, 16:37

the link don't work.. typo.

Do Gooder · 13-08-2008, 16:39

needs a bit of griddery.. everything is a pap out of line i reckons.

CharmingMan · 13-08-2008, 16:41

I quite like it,as limbo rightly says the logo needs some love

TeZ · 13-08-2008, 16:46

Is the layout supposed to be staggered.

I like it tho, bar the layout.

Do Gooder · 13-08-2008, 16:55

everything needs to be shuggled to line up to grid. recent posts put into a single box.

MacShak · 13-08-2008, 17:02

The copy reads like you were recording it for a web answering machine.

I'd think about using that section to give a little intro to the latest piece you've created instead. That way it will keep the site fresher.

Not gone on the logo either, the way you have the names on top of one another. And check your links in your portfolio. The first 2 I clicked on sent me to a 404 page and a mistyped URL.

Otherwise not too bad

Paul · 13-08-2008, 19:49

ok, so the logo is shit, I'm not a logo guy. Mainly developing mostly of time so I'll have to work on that.

cheers good, mac, limb, charm and tez. I'll work on a few thing and let you know

pringshia · 14-08-2008, 11:16

I like the clean design and the typography you used. Well done.

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Paul Junkie[scum] Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: location, location Posts: 1,868	quick crit can I get a some crit on this, simple blog/ folio link removed mucho gracias Last edited by Paul : 15-08-2008 at 06:47.

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Limbo Another turn. Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 5,980	Not bad. Lacks a little hierarchy - well on the homepage at least. The Logo isn't to my taste, it lumbers about up their like a really tall kid at a school disco. __________________ CSS Search Engine

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Do Gooder Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 5,894	the link don't work.. typo. Last edited by Do Gooder : 15-08-2008 at 14:56.

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Do Gooder Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 5,894	needs a bit of griddery.. everything is a pap out of line i reckons. Last edited by Do Gooder : 13-08-2008 at 17:12.

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CharmingMan Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 2,019	I quite like it,as limbo rightly says the logo needs some love __________________ Big Mouth Strikes Again

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TeZ At the end of production. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxford Posts: 1,217	Is the layout supposed to be staggered. I like it tho, bar the layout. __________________ Happiness By the Kilowatt Forever one more "Keeping it Real" Point, to whatever Pugsley has.

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Do Gooder Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 5,894	everything needs to be shuggled to line up to grid. recent posts put into a single box. Last edited by Do Gooder : 14-08-2008 at 05:26.

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MacShak Registered User Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 17	The copy reads like you were recording it for a web answering machine. I'd think about using that section to give a little intro to the latest piece you've created instead. That way it will keep the site fresher. Not gone on the logo either, the way you have the names on top of one another. And check your links in your portfolio. The first 2 I clicked on sent me to a 404 page and a mistyped URL. Otherwise not too bad Last edited by MacShak : 13-08-2008 at 19:44.

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Paul Junkie[scum] Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: location, location Posts: 1,868	ok, so the logo is shit, I'm not a logo guy. Mainly developing mostly of time so I'll have to work on that. cheers good, mac, limb, charm and tez. I'll work on a few thing and let you know

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pringshia Registered User Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 20	I like the clean design and the typography you used. Well done.

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