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OriginalDisco · 14-08-2008, 05:06

Really? Nice one...

I'm gash at copywriting.

TeZ · 14-08-2008, 05:11

Whats radioactive about it ?

gotnousername · 14-08-2008, 05:13

That site, it had large amounts that they dispose of - a big selling point. If you could read the copy it would explain.

So am I disco. English is not my strong point...

TeZ · 14-08-2008, 05:18

Nice one.

OriginalDisco · 14-08-2008, 05:23

I'm trying to re-do my CV at the minute and it's doing my fucking head in. Can't write fuck all for myself.

Still, again, nice brochure mate. I did a new brochure last week and looking back at it now it looks shite, need to re-think it.

gotnousername · 14-08-2008, 05:23

Quote:

Originally Posted by TeZ

Nice one.

Actually I found out, it's where the famous bouncing bomb was developed by Wallace. You know Dam Busters.

Also they filmed the spinning room scene from James bond - Moonraker there. They mashed it up.

p.s. My cv took three weeks. And it's still not what I wanted. Had some good help from the DT Copy Jedi's though that helped a lot.

OriginalDisco · 14-08-2008, 05:28

Copy Jedi's - that's what I need!

Mik · 14-08-2008, 05:29

careful of the:

The
Environ
ment

Capitals on 2 lines and then lowercase - looks oddball.
Also a load of ragged type on the health & safety page

TeZ · 14-08-2008, 05:35

Moonraker! awesome, looks great work Mitch. Chav.

gotnousername · 14-08-2008, 05:41

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr Fred

careful of the:

The
Environ
ment

Capitals on 2 lines and then lowercase - looks oddball.
Also a load of ragged type on the health & safety page

Cheers Fred. Appreciated.

What would you do to the H&S page. The first 2 columns are bullets.

Pugsley · 14-08-2008, 05:44

Love it. Really nice colours and it looks very punchy. What's it getting printed on?

Not a fan of the broken environment word but not sure what you could do with it apart from reduce in size but then that would ruin it's impact.
Nice photography by the way.

You got some uber l33t skillz mad dawg.

TeZ · 14-08-2008, 05:47

Quote:

Originally Posted by designneverdies

What's it getting printed on?

Ooo now where talking.

Pugsley · 14-08-2008, 05:49

yeah, I'm turning into a paper freak. My friends think I'm weird cause I often smell books, and look more at the paper and binding that what's actually in the fecking book.

Do Gooder · 14-08-2008, 05:49

80gsm gloss

gotnousername · 14-08-2008, 05:50

Not decided yet.

What do you reckon.

All I know is that I want it to be uncoated. Matt lam cover?

TeZ · 14-08-2008, 05:50

Yes matt lam cover, maybe 170gsm. Or if you want it chunky 250. And 150 pages tbh its paper part not much you can do with it.

Coops · 14-08-2008, 05:51

Yep, 80gsm gloss all the way.

Nice one Mitchy boy - cover looks lovely.

TeZ · 14-08-2008, 05:53

80 ?? Yuk.

gotnousername · 14-08-2008, 05:54

Inside 80gsm gloss.

What about the cover?

TeZ · 14-08-2008, 05:55

I would say 170.... but it would seem this is being done on the cheap. So 150.

14-08-2008, 05:11	#82 (permalink)
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14-08-2008, 05:18	#84 (permalink)
TeZ At the end of production. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxford Posts: 1,217	Nice one. __________________ Happiness By the Kilowatt Forever one more "Keeping it Real" Point, to whatever Pugsley has.

14-08-2008, 05:35	#89 (permalink)
TeZ At the end of production. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxford Posts: 1,217	Moonraker! awesome, looks great work Mitch. Chav. __________________ Happiness By the Kilowatt Forever one more "Keeping it Real" Point, to whatever Pugsley has.

14-08-2008, 05:44	#91 (permalink)
Pugsley L'me at'em. L'me at'em. Join Date: May 2007 Location: Aberdeen, Scotland Posts: 2,884	Love it. Really nice colours and it looks very punchy. What's it getting printed on? Not a fan of the broken environment word but not sure what you could do with it apart from reduce in size but then that would ruin it's impact. Nice photography by the way. You got some uber l33t skillz mad dawg. __________________ If your colours are starting to run, let them all run, run away from you. Flux - Bloc Party Design Never Dies Currently Has: 26 "Keeping it Real" Points, 1 bonus point for being Sexy and a sea urchin.

14-08-2008, 05:49	#93 (permalink)
Pugsley L'me at'em. L'me at'em. Join Date: May 2007 Location: Aberdeen, Scotland Posts: 2,884	yeah, I'm turning into a paper freak. My friends think I'm weird cause I often smell books, and look more at the paper and binding that what's actually in the fecking book. __________________ If your colours are starting to run, let them all run, run away from you. Flux - Bloc Party Design Never Dies Currently Has: 26 "Keeping it Real" Points, 1 bonus point for being Sexy and a sea urchin.

14-08-2008, 05:06	#81 (permalink)
OriginalDisco The Fusion Minstrel Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: York Posts: 450	Really? Nice one... I'm gash at copywriting.

14-08-2008, 05:13	#83 (permalink)
gotnousername Chavtastic Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 1,790	That site, it had large amounts that they dispose of - a big selling point. If you could read the copy it would explain. So am I disco. English is not my strong point...

14-08-2008, 05:23	#85 (permalink)
OriginalDisco The Fusion Minstrel Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: York Posts: 450	I'm trying to re-do my CV at the minute and it's doing my fucking head in. Can't write fuck all for myself. Still, again, nice brochure mate. I did a new brochure last week and looking back at it now it looks shite, need to re-think it.

14-08-2008, 05:28	#87 (permalink)
OriginalDisco The Fusion Minstrel Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: York Posts: 450	Copy Jedi's - that's what I need!

14-08-2008, 05:29	#88 (permalink)
Mik Magazines™ Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Glasgow.. Posts: 11,861	careful of the: The Environ ment Capitals on 2 lines and then lowercase - looks oddball. Also a load of ragged type on the health & safety page

14-08-2008, 05:49	#94 (permalink)
Do Gooder Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 5,894	80gsm gloss

14-08-2008, 05:50	#95 (permalink)
gotnousername Chavtastic Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 1,790	Not decided yet. What do you reckon. All I know is that I want it to be uncoated. Matt lam cover?

14-08-2008, 05:50	#96 (permalink)
TeZ At the end of production. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxford Posts: 1,217	Yes matt lam cover, maybe 170gsm. Or if you want it chunky 250. And 150 pages tbh its paper part not much you can do with it. __________________ Happiness By the Kilowatt Forever one more "Keeping it Real" Point, to whatever Pugsley has.

14-08-2008, 05:51	#97 (permalink)
Coops Pops. Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 3,833	Yep, 80gsm gloss all the way. Nice one Mitchy boy - cover looks lovely.

14-08-2008, 05:53	#98 (permalink)
TeZ At the end of production. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxford Posts: 1,217	80 ?? Yuk. __________________ Happiness By the Kilowatt Forever one more "Keeping it Real" Point, to whatever Pugsley has.

14-08-2008, 05:54	#99 (permalink)
gotnousername Chavtastic Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 1,790	Inside 80gsm gloss. What about the cover?

14-08-2008, 05:55	#100 (permalink)
TeZ At the end of production. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxford Posts: 1,217	I would say 170.... but it would seem this is being done on the cheap. So 150. __________________ Happiness By the Kilowatt Forever one more "Keeping it Real" Point, to whatever Pugsley has.

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