Old 04-08-2008, 12:48   #1 (permalink)
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Put this one aside for a week or two so just looking for some final crit before this goes to the printers.

Won't be as much room around the sides once it's been cut (taking bleed into account).

Lots of other ways of displaying everything but any comments and nit-picks on the layout appreciated - cheers!


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Old 04-08-2008, 12:56   #2 (permalink)
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I find that all the elements aren't really lined up. The grid is all over the place.

I love your logo, and I like the half-white half-green card, but the positioning of all your text bugs me.
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Old 04-08-2008, 16:58   #3 (permalink)
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OMG it even has a watermark..
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Old 04-08-2008, 17:28   #4 (permalink)
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OMG it even has a watermark..


no idea what i was looking for
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Old 04-08-2008, 17:33   #5 (permalink)
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Single sided, for a graphic designer? Really?

Do you really need so much littering it? White space is your friend. No clear grid not much lining up with anything :/
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Old 04-08-2008, 18:02   #6 (permalink)
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It's double sided. Simple logo on front. Just after comments on this.

I agree, grid needs work. Any suggestions appreciated.

Thanks very much.
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Old 04-08-2008, 18:08   #7 (permalink)
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Eh well then all the comments made about the cards last time still hold true, if you have the logo on the other side, you don't need to cram this side full of information.

Lose the logo, the needless graphic design web design e-media bit , and line all the contact details to well, anything on the card you should have lots of nice clean space to play with when it's a bit emptier.
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