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Soup Of The Day · 06-08-2008, 09:14

I realize what you're trying to do with the bucket, but I don't like it.

Sure the Jack and Jill we all know went up the hill to fetch blah blah... but this is for a coffee shoppe. The bucket/pail doesn't have anything to do with the café.

Maybe just the Jack & Jill characters going up a hill to fetch... coffee? It would be tough to pull off in a logo that will sometimes appear small but try that.

Two little stick figures going up a hill, and at the top of the hill there's a steaming cup of coffee. Boom.

Coops · 06-08-2008, 09:16

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Originally Posted by Soup Of The Day

but this is for a coffee shoppe.

Ye Olde Coffee Shoppe

Do Gooder · 06-08-2008, 09:22

Hark!

TeZ · 06-08-2008, 09:34

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Originally Posted by Coops

Ye Olde Coffee Shoppe

LOL !

gusdsnail · 07-08-2008, 01:32

Thanks Soup, again i did sketch two figures running and I did have the hill motive in sketches as well. My problem is the poem is inherently negative i mean they go up a hill and then fall down and hurt themselves.

I'll keep working on it.

hawken · 07-08-2008, 02:30

I also heard that Jack broke his todger

Frenelli · 07-08-2008, 02:50

dont even put jack and jill.

Simply do this: Put a hill with a cup of coffee on the left side and write jack and jill.

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Soup Of The Day Non Stop Pop Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Winnipeg, Canada Posts: 982	I realize what you're trying to do with the bucket, but I don't like it. Sure the Jack and Jill we all know went up the hill to fetch blah blah... but this is for a coffee shoppe. The bucket/pail doesn't have anything to do with the café. Maybe just the Jack & Jill characters going up a hill to fetch... coffee? It would be tough to pull off in a logo that will sometimes appear small but try that. Two little stick figures going up a hill, and at the top of the hill there's a steaming cup of coffee. Boom.

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gusdsnail I'm not really a snail Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Sydney Posts: 54	Thanks Soup, again i did sketch two figures running and I did have the hill motive in sketches as well. My problem is the poem is inherently negative i mean they go up a hill and then fall down and hurt themselves. I'll keep working on it.

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Frenelli Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 250	dont even put jack and jill. Simply do this: Put a hill with a cup of coffee on the left side and write jack and jill.

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