Old 10-07-2008, 10:59   #21 (permalink)
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any better?

eh?

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Old 10-07-2008, 11:06   #22 (permalink)
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any better?
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Old 10-07-2008, 11:09   #23 (permalink)
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are you using the same typeface for text as ident?

red / grey / red /grey/grey /red.

all over the shop.
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Old 10-07-2008, 11:12   #24 (permalink)
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yeah. i am using the same typeface as its better than the other font I'm allowed to use.

whats wrong with the red & grey?
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Old 10-07-2008, 11:15   #25 (permalink)
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haha coop - dull arse

nothing wrong with red and grey - but not a little obvious?

also consistency - every other line or dates or locations etc -
whats red and whats grey?
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Old 10-07-2008, 11:15   #26 (permalink)
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I'm confused now.
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Old 10-07-2008, 11:16   #27 (permalink)
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yeah. i am using the same typeface as its better than the other font I'm allowed to use.

you only got 2?
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Old 10-07-2008, 11:18   #28 (permalink)
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Yeap. The one I've used and Solex.

Solex font family : MyFonts

And could possibly push them to allow me to use Univers but i don't think it would fit in well.
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Old 10-07-2008, 12:14   #29 (permalink)
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I think the red text is shouting louder than the grey, and therefore you should swap the titles "Preview 6-8pm" with the dates "Friday 29th August". At the moment the hierarchy seems a bit off.

Looking good so far, though, well done.
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OK losers.

Anything else?
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