Old 30-06-2008, 02:12   #1 (permalink)
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Redesign Crit

I'm in the process of redesigned my portfolio and am looking for some feedback on the following possible mockup. Any thoughts? Its been a while since I've designed for web.

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Old 30-06-2008, 03:22   #2 (permalink)
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It's looking good.

doesn't FAP mean wank though?
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Old 30-06-2008, 03:28   #3 (permalink)
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His .sig sums it up pretty tidily.
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Old 30-06-2008, 04:38   #4 (permalink)
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Prefer the current one.
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Old 30-06-2008, 09:55   #5 (permalink)
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background is not cartoonish enough
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Old 30-06-2008, 09:56   #6 (permalink)
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Who would hire anyone with a website named like that?
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Old 30-06-2008, 10:45   #7 (permalink)
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Quote:
Originally Posted by hawken
It's looking good.

doesn't FAP mean wank though?


yeah. its also my current blog title.
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Old 30-06-2008, 10:53   #8 (permalink)
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I agree, I wouldn't be able to take you seriously with an actual business title that relates to masturbation.

Ever think about changing that? You should.
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Old 30-06-2008, 13:06   #9 (permalink)
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alright name aside any comments on the layout?
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Old 30-06-2008, 13:09   #10 (permalink)
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I prefer the current one too.
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Old 30-06-2008, 13:16   #11 (permalink)
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Yeah I like the current one too. I spent more than a couple minutes playing with the middle FAP. Cool actionscript
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Old 30-06-2008, 17:34   #12 (permalink)
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hmmm some valid points in here. I think it was the header part of the site that was bothering me. Tried this out, any better?

Cheers,

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Old 30-06-2008, 17:42   #13 (permalink)
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I don't really like pale yellow.
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Old 30-06-2008, 20:22   #14 (permalink)
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the colours are too bright imo
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Old 14-07-2008, 02:30   #15 (permalink)
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well, took a lot of the advice on here and finalized it as seen here:

Ian Flaig - Selected Work 2008
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Old 14-07-2008, 05:36   #16 (permalink)
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Looks nice. I agree with Soup about the name. Employers aren't stupid, especially ones that spend a lot of time infront of a computer. You only have to visit a forum or two before you know the definition of fap.

I know you didn't ask for crit on the name, but it's a a part of the design so I technically am :p

Edit: You DID change the title. I'm sorry :x
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Old 14-07-2008, 05:49   #17 (permalink)
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If you care it has some problems in IE6.

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Old 14-07-2008, 11:49   #18 (permalink)
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thanks datahound, ill look into that. I hate this whole 'valid' thing... gah.
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