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29-06-2008, 14:43
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with a hint of lemon
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Logo Concept - Screen38
Hey, this is the first thing that came to my head when i got the go ahead to design it.. any ideas on changes and views on current!  Online portfolio: mgpwr.co.uk
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29-06-2008, 14:56
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with a hint of lemon
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Not sure what you mean by that!? is there anything similar you can point me to, i'm on logopond right now having a peruse however not jumping out yet for screen 38! Online portfolio: mgpwr.co.uk
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29-06-2008, 15:13
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all the shapes look like lazy default stuff - the number needs kerning in. why are the words thirty eight ran together? the text at the bottom will be illegible at smaller sizes. generally needs tightening up and a bit of craft. you are letting the computer lead the design process... bad thing to do. anti social marketing
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29-06-2008, 15:16
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with a hint of lemon
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thats because it is all defauly stuff cos well! i just had no empathy for this.. :S Online portfolio: mgpwr.co.uk
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29-06-2008, 15:29
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with a hint of lemon
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any better?  Online portfolio: mgpwr.co.uk
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29-06-2008, 15:29
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it's worth spending time at the initial concept stage away from the computer. the old pencil and paper! if you ain't no good at drawing... what you draw doesn't need to look 'good'. concentrate on the concept, layout and shapes examples pulled off google:   do that then scan into illustrator and use as a template. cleaning up and polishing as you go. anti social marketing
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29-06-2008, 15:31
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nope. the first was way better (as a starting point) imo. anti social marketing
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29-06-2008, 15:51
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with a hint of lemon
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i am actually stuck for ideas! ohhhummm Online portfolio: mgpwr.co.uk
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29-06-2008, 16:24
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with a hint of lemon
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anyone got any ideas, any links to point me to some?? Online portfolio: mgpwr.co.uk
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29-06-2008, 16:46
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the concept, while not very new, isn't at all bad on the first fella. it is the execution that smells a bit. again. draw the tv set a few times with a real pencil on a bit of paper on your desk. make the logo work on paper. only then,scan it in and work with it. it will help. And the process will turn up other options that wont have come to you sat playing with fonts and shapes at the computer. anti social marketing
Last edited by Do Gooder : 29-06-2008 at 16:58. |
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