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Old 27-06-2008, 10:24   #1 (permalink)
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Please review: www.charmhtml.com

Convert design from PSD to HTML is designed and coded from scratch. Though hardly an artistic design I'd say, but it's my best and I'm trying all I can to improve it. lol~

Thanks for any suggestions!
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Old 27-06-2008, 10:28   #2 (permalink)
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Code looks very solid, for one thing. If you're based in the US, you could probably up your price.

The design is alright, I guess. Nothing special, really. But certainly not unappealing. I don't really care for the nav enlarging effect and the lack of alignment along any semblance of a vertical grid (along with various centered items in the mix) makes it hard to read/follow.
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Old 27-06-2008, 11:25   #3 (permalink)
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Along with pgo's suggestions, I'd suggest making yourself a real logo, rather than plain Arial bold.
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Old 27-06-2008, 11:29   #4 (permalink)
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some of your testimonials are really odd.
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Old 27-06-2008, 11:39   #5 (permalink)
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you really need a logo and I can't stand the nav.

it's kind of boring and unorganized looking

the big red space on the bottom makes no sense to me.

no columns or sidebars?
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Old 27-06-2008, 12:19   #6 (permalink)
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Holy shit, that main mouseover menu is genious.
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Old 27-06-2008, 12:26   #7 (permalink)
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Holy shit, that main mouseover menu is genious.


I completely disagree

Whats with that navy blue?

Rather, whats going on with your entire colour scheme? you have about a hundred different colours in there, and they don't tie together whatsoever

Whats with that giant red/orange fade at the bottom? THATS random


Start the design from scratch with one consistent colour palette that is no more than 5 colours (you could argue 6)

And you're not limited by 5 colours, because you have an infinite amount of shades within each colour to use to differentiate your design elements
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Old 27-06-2008, 12:32   #8 (permalink)
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That's not the fucking point, I don't like the blue particularly, either.

I'm talking about the mechanics here.
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Old 27-06-2008, 12:38   #9 (permalink)
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Meh, just some absolute positioning on a hover, applied to <strong> which probably should have been <span> defined as a block
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