Old 27-05-2008, 23:24   #1 (permalink)
mattbl34
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Promotional sticker

Hey all, thanks for the last advice on the site, I am still cleaning up over there. I need some advice on a sticker.

Be mean, ruthless, etc. I am not a designer but I cannot afford one yet - so I am left to do it myself.

I have included two, which is best and how can I make it better? This is to be distributed at a documentary photography festival promoting a new documentary magazine/website. Were looking to attract young photographers to our site, 18-28 or so.

The sticker is 3" x3" - any advice welcome. Even if you say I suck.
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Old 28-05-2008, 00:02   #2 (permalink)
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I vote #2. I'd say your design is still better than most of the crap that gets posted here in showcase. However, it isn't very refined - just keep practicing.

While I like it, it could use something more. Not too much, but some little visual cue to photography.
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Old 28-05-2008, 10:38   #3 (permalink)
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I agree with pgo, I think perhaps a single white line somewhere or something...(still thinking).

I do like it but it's lacking a certain substance...simple substance.
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