Old 21-05-2008, 06:09   #1 (permalink)
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What do you think?

Hey,

Its my second post, so i am not able to post links

I have made a blog-portfolio page for myself...what do you think?

Startpage: up.opti-sign.de/blog/blogfolio_start.jpg

Main Page: up.opti-sign.de/blog/blogfolio_largebg.jpg


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Old 21-05-2008, 06:15   #2 (permalink)
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The second picture reminds me of ipod. >.<

Quite nice and clean look. Though i always wonder why people like to have narrow space for content in their blog. -_-
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Old 21-05-2008, 06:19   #3 (permalink)
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I quite like the start page. I am not sold on the inner page, maybe you need to make it more like the intro. Less reflections, more artwork.
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Old 21-05-2008, 09:56   #4 (permalink)
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I really like it - it's fresh, doesn't look like an average Wordpress template.

I think your darker gray text on your main page needs to be higher contrast. With all the shadows from your main content panel, you need to separate the colours to improve legibility.

Also - header. Are you going to have a logo or title?
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Old 21-05-2008, 10:15   #5 (permalink)
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Nice clean look. Do you want to build this page in flash? If not, put out the anti alias in your text.
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Old 21-05-2008, 10:17   #6 (permalink)
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Old 21-05-2008, 10:26   #7 (permalink)
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I'm not fan of that whole modern montage intro thing. I understand it things that are relevant to you and obviously it’s for a personal blog-folio which in that case it works on that level but to me it’s still just mess!

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Startpage: up.opti-sign.de/blog/blogfolio_start.jpg
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Old 21-05-2008, 10:28   #8 (permalink)
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thanks for your advice!

#illu: no flash - why should it not work? i think i will use wordpress.

#Soup Of The Day - thanks! - i am not sure yet about a logo...but i have no ideas yet you?


... and yes i love apple
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Old 21-05-2008, 10:37   #9 (permalink)
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#illu: no flash - why should it not work? i think i will use wordpress.

Well, u dont use a standard web font for your text. And i think your not only gonna use images for your tekst . U better should give your main tekst a font like Verdana or Arial etc.
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