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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2007
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Live event club poster ~ College Assignment(s)
hi folks, havent been designing much lately for a while now. here's a first in like 5 months. tell me what you think ty. ![]() and here's the cd cover for it. It's a bit different in effects than the poster *gulp*, hope my teacher wont mind... ![]() |
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Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 225
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well if you go and look at electronic cd covers and such most of them dont really have a clever concept its more just about the visuals lol kinky... yes i know the meaning well i didnt want to make it a R+ project so I went with a slighty sexy approach to it. i.e cat ears, pole dancing etc |
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Non Stop Pop
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Something about the text on that poster that I just dislike. Tight kerning on serif type is always difficult, and doesn't work for you here. The type near the bottom of the page all looks like it's flying off the bottom of the page, it's just too far down all by itself. |
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1. Ditch that 'model'. god awful photo 2. Quote:
on a positive note, i love the design of the word 'kinky' in your second comp. |
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Chavtastic
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: West London
Posts: 1,297
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Soup of the day is spot on. Your kerning makes my brain feel squashed. Not sure if it's the right typeface to have kerning that tight. Again, would be nice to have something that is yours, and not just a copied style from deviant art. |
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