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mytvtalk · 29-04-2008, 18:34

hi everyone this is my first website i have made using html and css, i would appreciate any feedback and if your into the content on my website please feel free to register.

ww w. mytv talk. com Welcome To My TV Talk.com Where Tv Comes Alive

thats my site thanks in advance

Sampson · 29-04-2008, 20:09

Good start. Visit your library and check out a book on typography and the elements of design. You could always take a night course somewhere too.

Lotricthus · 30-04-2008, 11:14

I agree with Sampson. Good start, but keep going.

I would lose the blue and adapt a darker color scheme

mytvtalk · 05-05-2008, 21:59

thans for the advice guys il get it sorted

Soup Of The Day · 08-05-2008, 14:30

I don't often use the word hate, because it's such a strong word, but I hate the centered text on the content pages. Left align those bad boys.

wallyboy75 · 12-05-2008, 15:13

I agree with soup of the day as far as centering, and your links at the bottom of the page take away the line in front of the Home link.

nextlimits · 13-05-2008, 07:32

Also you might consider a book on shapes and color perception

bazzle · 13-05-2008, 07:47

I don't think your headings are big enough. You should use h1's instead of h2's.

mx · 13-05-2008, 08:46

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Originally Posted by bazzle

I don't think your headings are big enough. You should use h1's instead of h2's.

Ignore him. You've already got one <H1> and that's fine.

You haven't got any <h2>'s though, jumping straight to h3's, which is un-semantic.
You've also using <br/>'s outside of <p>'s as spacing. Get rid of them and margin the paragraphs instead.
Again you don't need <center> tags. Style the surrounding div instead.

Code-wise it's not a bad start at all.

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29-04-2008, 20:09	#2 (permalink)
Sampson Roll Forever Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 195	Good start. Visit your library and check out a book on typography and the elements of design. You could always take a night course somewhere too.

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Lotricthus Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Georgia, USA Posts: 167	I agree with Sampson. Good start, but keep going. I would lose the blue and adapt a darker color scheme

05-05-2008, 21:59	#4 (permalink)
mytvtalk Registered User Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 7	thans for the advice guys il get it sorted

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Soup Of The Day Non Stop Pop Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Winnipeg, Canada Posts: 500	I don't often use the word hate, because it's such a strong word, but I hate the centered text on the content pages. Left align those bad boys.

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wallyboy75 Registered User Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 6	I agree with soup of the day as far as centering, and your links at the bottom of the page take away the line in front of the Home link.

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nextlimits Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Romania Posts: 20	Also you might consider a book on shapes and color perception

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bazzle Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Derby uk Posts: 421	I don't think your headings are big enough. You should use h1's instead of h2's.

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