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joey · 23-04-2008, 15:47

Just finished my new logo, thought I'd see what you guys think:

[EDITED to remove link]

apple · 23-04-2008, 15:59

Well, to be honest, there isn't very much to talk about. It's very plain.

flatcat · 23-04-2008, 16:36

So by "my new logo (and portfolio site)", you mean "my new logo and splash page because my portfolio isn't live yet"?

Logo looks good though. Not much else to really say.

joey · 23-04-2008, 16:44

Quote:

Originally Posted by flatcat

So by "my new logo (and portfolio site)", you mean "my new logo and splash page because my portfolio isn't live yet"?

The actual portfolio is going to replace the part that says "Portfolio coming soon"... nothing's else is going to change. It's not really a splash page.

Paul · 23-04-2008, 16:46

like the logo joey, not sure about the - graphic design bit tho

huebert · 23-04-2008, 17:22

yep i agree with karloff, I don't understand why you would need to have it on there as part of your logo

LukeV · 23-04-2008, 17:23

Did I go color blind?

Ah no, no I didn't.

Heh just kidding

Logo is nice but nothing to get excited about right?

wheedwacker · 23-04-2008, 17:37

I like the J and P in the circle, but I don't think that your name and profession look the best with it.

Where it says "If you'd like to work with me please send me an email," the word email should be a link to your email.

And is it necessary to have two links to Unrequired Reading?

wheedwacker · 23-04-2008, 17:39

And on Unrequired Reading, you should add something so the last blog post shown doesn't have a line under it. There is only one line at the bottom of the other pages, like About.

H3LLRA1Z3R · 23-04-2008, 17:40

The font combination is nice, but as a whole it looks unresolved. Has potential though.

fetusface · 23-04-2008, 22:29

dont really dig it, sorry. the logo seems a little uninspired and even though i know you are going for the whole 'minimal serif fonts' style id get rid of the italics.

OriginalDisco · 24-04-2008, 04:17

Defo has potential, I'd drop '– Graphic Design' though, maybe work on the arrangement of the type and mark... Having it up there isn't doing anything for me.

Mitch · 24-04-2008, 04:29

I really like the ligature Joey. It is smooth and seemless. Would be good to see it larger.

As said loose the Graphic design, maybe even the circle and play with scales. Maybe use a type face that contrast slightly with the ligature?

A couple of the comments on here made me smile. Bloody YTS designers.

emil · 24-04-2008, 04:32

Well, I like it. Circle and all.
Probably the graphic design isn't needed, but I like the looks.

JonoMarshall · 24-04-2008, 04:54

Very nice, reminds me of Si Scott somewhat though.

Mitch · 24-04-2008, 05:02

Can I see the site?

sean_r · 24-04-2008, 05:44

Joey the symbol itself is strong enough to stand by itself imo. Just have that, no need to spell it out, people are clever, they'll get it.

Keep it single colour, I like it "plain", it's classic.

tanned & sunny · 24-04-2008, 07:43

I'd drop the type underneath, i think its pointless right now and i'd drop the circle in to a brand colour, or is it just in black cause its still at the development stage?

As with Mitch i can't see the site?

sub · 24-04-2008, 07:51

Quote:

Originally Posted by sean_r

Joey the symbol itself is strong enough to stand by itself imo.

Agreed.

Don't mind the text with it but definitely doesn't need the '-' before "Graphic ...".

2Dfruit · 24-04-2008, 08:22

reminds me of the jurassic park logo.

23-04-2008, 15:47	#1 (permalink)
joey Joey™ Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: California Posts: 1,081	I have a logo Just finished my new logo, thought I'd see what you guys think: [EDITED to remove link] __________________ Something here very soon. Last edited by joey : 23-04-2008 at 19:39.

23-04-2008, 16:36	#3 (permalink)
flatcat beauty through chaos Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Vancouver, British Columbia Posts: 778	So by "my new logo (and portfolio site)", you mean "my new logo and splash page because my portfolio isn't live yet"? Logo looks good though. Not much else to really say. __________________ audentes fortuna iuvat Flatcat

23-04-2008, 17:37	#8 (permalink)
wheedwacker competitionmaster 2.0 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: USA Posts: 1,335	I like the J and P in the circle, but I don't think that your name and profession look the best with it. Where it says "If you'd like to work with me please send me an email," the word email should be a link to your email. And is it necessary to have two links to Unrequired Reading? __________________ My Design/Development Site Koloration (design studio)

23-04-2008, 17:39	#9 (permalink)
wheedwacker competitionmaster 2.0 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: USA Posts: 1,335	And on Unrequired Reading, you should add something so the last blog post shown doesn't have a line under it. There is only one line at the bottom of the other pages, like About. __________________ My Design/Development Site Koloration (design studio) Last edited by wheedwacker : 23-04-2008 at 18:13.

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fetusface ™™™™™™™ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Calgary, Canada Posts: 429	dont really dig it, sorry. the logo seems a little uninspired and even though i know you are going for the whole 'minimal serif fonts' style id get rid of the italics. __________________ www.ianflaig.com -$$$

23-04-2008, 15:59	#2 (permalink)
apple Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Scotland Posts: 32	Well, to be honest, there isn't very much to talk about. It's very plain.

23-04-2008, 16:46	#5 (permalink)
Paul Junkie[scum] Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: location, location Posts: 1,691	like the logo joey, not sure about the - graphic design bit tho

23-04-2008, 17:22	#6 (permalink)
huebert Super Grandmaster Guru Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: London UK<--> The Innernet Posts: 40	yep i agree with karloff, I don't understand why you would need to have it on there as part of your logo

23-04-2008, 17:23	#7 (permalink)
LukeV Best custom title ever. Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 205	Did I go color blind? Ah no, no I didn't. Heh just kidding Logo is nice but nothing to get excited about right?

23-04-2008, 17:40	#10 (permalink)
H3LLRA1Z3R whiney little bitch... Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New Zealand Posts: 367	The font combination is nice, but as a whole it looks unresolved. Has potential though.

24-04-2008, 04:17	#12 (permalink)
OriginalDisco The Fusion Minstrel Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: York Posts: 312	Defo has potential, I'd drop '– Graphic Design' though, maybe work on the arrangement of the type and mark... Having it up there isn't doing anything for me.

24-04-2008, 04:29	#13 (permalink)
Mitch Chavtastic Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 1,388	I really like the ligature Joey. It is smooth and seemless. Would be good to see it larger. As said loose the Graphic design, maybe even the circle and play with scales. Maybe use a type face that contrast slightly with the ligature? A couple of the comments on here made me smile. Bloody YTS designers.

24-04-2008, 04:32	#14 (permalink)
emil dt immigrant Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bucharest - Romania Posts: 6,705	Well, I like it. Circle and all. Probably the graphic design isn't needed, but I like the looks. __________________ ABSTRACT Q X R

24-04-2008, 04:54	#15 (permalink)
JonoMarshall Day-Glo Jazz Monkey Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Shoreditch, London Posts: 1,132	Very nice, reminds me of Si Scott somewhat though. __________________ Jon Marshall - Graphic Design

24-04-2008, 05:02	#16 (permalink)
Mitch Chavtastic Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 1,388	Can I see the site?

24-04-2008, 05:44	#17 (permalink)
sean_r Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: London Posts: 1,093	Joey the symbol itself is strong enough to stand by itself imo. Just have that, no need to spell it out, people are clever, they'll get it. Keep it single colour, I like it "plain", it's classic.

24-04-2008, 07:43	#18 (permalink)
tanned & sunny tanned & sunny Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Chester UK Posts: 51	I'd drop the type underneath, i think its pointless right now and i'd drop the circle in to a brand colour, or is it just in black cause its still at the development stage? As with Mitch i can't see the site?

24-04-2008, 08:22	#20 (permalink)
2Dfruit Biscuit Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Ireland Posts: 905	reminds me of the jurassic park logo. __________________ "Get out of my face!" "NO! I'll get in your FACE!"

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