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1der · 24-01-2008, 03:33

petronamusicDOTcomFORWARDSLASHweb

can i get some feedback on the design, colours, navigation, loading, bugs, content etc etc

...and some pointers too

(for anybody who is going to point out the obvious fact that it should not be done in flash without any good point to make: F%^K Off!)

btw it is still a WIP

1der · 24-01-2008, 05:18

any input then...?

iblastoff · 24-01-2008, 06:33

looks like crap.

1der · 24-01-2008, 06:46

u think so?
the logo at the moment is just a temp.
and i personally dont like the colours but i am trying to use this as a learning project. I was given the design to work off of by the lad who wants the site done.
Any sugestions on how it could be improved design wise?

edit: i just saw your site ther iblast
your kind of sitting in a glass house there arent you?

anyway, anybody else who is good at designing, a few pointers would be really appreciated.

emil · 24-01-2008, 07:43

Actually his work is good.

The color combo you have chosen is in no way working. Dark grey and light purple and brown. Ditch it. Keep it simple. Or if you're using flash spice it up a lot (Adhemas Batista)

The side banner is crap.

Scrolling is annoying. Why not make pages full size?

Your site is about music (as far as I can tell) yet it lacks any creative touch you'd normally be expecting.

To sum up, looks dated and execution is poor. I'd go back to the drawing board.

Cookie503 · 24-01-2008, 08:13

1der, did you take it off? Cuz it just shows a temporary crappy screen...

Quote:

Originally Posted by 1der

edit: i just saw your site ther iblast
your kind of sitting in a glass house there arent you?

Actually, he rocks.

ptron · 25-01-2008, 01:34

If you wanted any constructive criticism you probably shouldn't of told people to fuck off

.

In my opinion purple shouldnt never be used...period. the scroll bar isnt very useable, there doesnt seem to be alot happening. its needs alot more work you really should wait until you have a finished design before showing people or you are just gonna get hammered as above.

adras · 25-01-2008, 01:56

Quote:

Originally Posted by 1der

(for anybody who is going to point out the obvious fact that it should not be done in flash without any good point to make: F%^K Off!)

Oh yeah, maybe read this.
Reasons why you shouldnt use flash for anything other than video and audio streaming

24-01-2008, 03:33	#1 (permalink)
1der Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 19	Www.petronamusic.coM (/web) petronamusicDOTcomFORWARDSLASHweb can i get some feedback on the design, colours, navigation, loading, bugs, content etc etc ...and some pointers too (for anybody who is going to point out the obvious fact that it should not be done in flash without any good point to make: F%^K Off!) btw it is still a WIP

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iblastoff gotsa a malanga! Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: ottawa, canada Posts: 508	looks like crap. __________________ iblastoff.ca \| stevelam.ca

24-01-2008, 07:43	#5 (permalink)
emil dt immigrant Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bucharest. Romania Superpower: Invisible zapper Posts: 8,714	Actually his work is good. The color combo you have chosen is in no way working. Dark grey and light purple and brown. Ditch it. Keep it simple. Or if you're using flash spice it up a lot (Adhemas Batista) The side banner is crap. Scrolling is annoying. Why not make pages full size? Your site is about music (as far as I can tell) yet it lacks any creative touch you'd normally be expecting. To sum up, looks dated and execution is poor. I'd go back to the drawing board. __________________ M A Q I N A

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24-01-2008, 05:18	#2 (permalink)
1der Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 19	any input then...?

24-01-2008, 06:46	#4 (permalink)
1der Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 19	u think so? the logo at the moment is just a temp. and i personally dont like the colours but i am trying to use this as a learning project. I was given the design to work off of by the lad who wants the site done. Any sugestions on how it could be improved design wise? edit: i just saw your site ther iblast your kind of sitting in a glass house there arent you? anyway, anybody else who is good at designing, a few pointers would be really appreciated.

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ptron maker of graphics + stuff Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Brisbane, Australia Posts: 262	If you wanted any constructive criticism you probably shouldn't of told people to fuck off . In my opinion purple shouldnt never be used...period. the scroll bar isnt very useable, there doesnt seem to be alot happening. its needs alot more work you really should wait until you have a finished design before showing people or you are just gonna get hammered as above.

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