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forbes · 14-12-2007, 06:12

did this lil flash microsite for a new packet of crisps comin out soon.. did a bit of 3d on the packet..

linky

luke vex · 14-12-2007, 06:29

I like it. Although I did find the crisps (flying out of the packet) animation a bit annoying after a while - Maybe only have it run during the intro.

Mr Fred · 14-12-2007, 06:30

types suspect.
not sure reflection is needed.

Is it supposed to look like Walkers?

emil · 14-12-2007, 06:34

get a crisper logo.

forbes · 14-12-2007, 06:40

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr Fred

types suspect.
not sure reflection is needed.

Is it supposed to look like Walkers?

i did have different fonts for this but client demanded trebuchet ms was used ALL OVER.. reflections werent my idea either..

just 2 things i wish i could change but cant..!

forbes · 14-12-2007, 06:43

Quote:

Originally Posted by luke vex

I like it. Although I did find the crisps (flying out of the packet) animation a bit annoying after a while - Maybe only have it run during the intro.

there actually isnt a way to stop it.. it was imported via 3ds max and for some reason just putting a simple stop(); on the last keyframe just buggers the whole thing

JonoMarshall · 14-12-2007, 07:02

Very nice, wasn't so keen on the cropped image on the "orders" page as it appears/disappears but otherwise very good.

datahound · 14-12-2007, 07:07

The bottom right of the orders image is still visible when you go to competitions which looks a bit untidy. Like the way it does that though.

sub · 14-12-2007, 07:30

Very good. My only gripe would be the pixelation you can see in the red of the logo and menu. Frame looks a bit chunky on the corners too. Red bitmaps are notoriously bad in flash even when using just light compression.

forbes · 14-12-2007, 07:38

cheers for the feedback guys - a second pair of eyes at the finer points always help, il fix em...

steveb · 14-12-2007, 10:20

I like the rollovers.
Stupid claim in the copy - that rice is more natural than spuds. Where do they think potatoes come from? Silly buggers.

Paddy · 14-12-2007, 10:31

Very nice. Suits the crisps well.

I'd have a word with the client though, see if you can't persuade him to change the copy. There's nothing people don't like more than being told what they like.

Also, you need to capitalise the 'P' in people under 'baked not fried', just for consistency's sake.

Soup Of The Day · 14-12-2007, 16:07

I think I would be upset if after seeing your site, my bag didn't have unlimited chips billowing out the top.

Like the colours

pat · 15-12-2007, 01:07

looks good, could you not involve the bag design a bit more in the heading type? Don't really know why you need the big ticks, make the type a little bit more fun! And yeah, know it's probably out of your reach but the copy is really off-putting. Have a word.

Colours and general layout are good though, navigation looks speshly good.

Herr Kurm · 15-12-2007, 06:50

nice. But do something with the phone, the texture on it looks like you have really badly compressed the picture.

forbes · 15-12-2007, 11:49

cheers for the feeback guys much appreciated.

very good point on the text used.. never really stopped to think about whats been written! il speak to boss see what we can do about changing text.

the original design had a different design on the logo and different fonts.. the client to be honest isnt very clued up on design at all (u should see his business card!) but despite my protests i had to change them...

cheers all

boroova · 19-12-2007, 16:00

I like it, even though I am not a great flash enthusiast. Red looks a bit too pale on my screen though.

14-12-2007, 06:12	#1 (permalink)
forbes Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Belfast Posts: 784	what you reckon... did this lil flash microsite for a new packet of crisps comin out soon.. did a bit of 3d on the packet.. linky

14-12-2007, 06:34	#4 (permalink)
emil dt immigrant Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bucharest - Romania Posts: 6,998	get a crisper logo. __________________ Tourism Q X R

14-12-2007, 07:07	#8 (permalink)
datahound Spare Parts Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Bracknell Forest Posts: 4,961	The bottom right of the orders image is still visible when you go to competitions which looks a bit untidy. Like the way it does that though. __________________ poochmedia \| Computer Spare Parts \| Computer & Telephone Disposals

14-12-2007, 07:30	#9 (permalink)
sub Shitcasket™ Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Brighton Posts: 4,264	Very good. My only gripe would be the pixelation you can see in the red of the logo and menu. Frame looks a bit chunky on the corners too. Red bitmaps are notoriously bad in flash even when using just light compression. __________________ Follow DT updates on Twitter: http://twitter.com/designerstalk

14-12-2007, 10:20	#11 (permalink)
steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 4,942	I like the rollovers. Stupid claim in the copy - that rice is more natural than spuds. Where do they think potatoes come from? Silly buggers. __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

14-12-2007, 06:29	#2 (permalink)
luke vex Registered User Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: manchester Posts: 23	I like it. Although I did find the crisps (flying out of the packet) animation a bit annoying after a while - Maybe only have it run during the intro.

14-12-2007, 06:30	#3 (permalink)
Mr Fred Magazines™ Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Glasgow.. Posts: 11,354	types suspect. not sure reflection is needed. Is it supposed to look like Walkers?

14-12-2007, 07:02	#7 (permalink)
JonoMarshall Day-Glo Jazz Monkey Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Shoreditch, London Posts: 1,129	Very nice, wasn't so keen on the cropped image on the "orders" page as it appears/disappears but otherwise very good.

14-12-2007, 07:38	#10 (permalink)
forbes Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Belfast Posts: 784	cheers for the feedback guys - a second pair of eyes at the finer points always help, il fix em...

14-12-2007, 10:31	#12 (permalink)
Paddy Grammar Deputy Join Date: May 2005 Location: Béal Feirste Posts: 1,158	Very nice. Suits the crisps well. I'd have a word with the client though, see if you can't persuade him to change the copy. There's nothing people don't like more than being told what they like. Also, you need to capitalise the 'P' in people under 'baked not fried', just for consistency's sake.

14-12-2007, 16:07	#13 (permalink)
Soup Of The Day Non Stop Pop Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Winnipeg, Canada Posts: 947	I think I would be upset if after seeing your site, my bag didn't have unlimited chips billowing out the top. Like the colours

15-12-2007, 01:07	#14 (permalink)
pat jorge regula Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: B'ham/Leeds Posts: 4,860	looks good, could you not involve the bag design a bit more in the heading type? Don't really know why you need the big ticks, make the type a little bit more fun! And yeah, know it's probably out of your reach but the copy is really off-putting. Have a word. Colours and general layout are good though, navigation looks speshly good. __________________

15-12-2007, 06:50	#15 (permalink)
Herr Kurm bloody peasant Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tallinn, Estonia Posts: 2,689	nice. But do something with the phone, the texture on it looks like you have really badly compressed the picture. __________________ refreshed portfolio

15-12-2007, 11:49	#16 (permalink)
forbes Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Belfast Posts: 784	cheers for the feeback guys much appreciated. very good point on the text used.. never really stopped to think about whats been written! il speak to boss see what we can do about changing text. the original design had a different design on the logo and different fonts.. the client to be honest isnt very clued up on design at all (u should see his business card!) but despite my protests i had to change them... cheers all

19-12-2007, 16:00	#17 (permalink)
boroova Registered User Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: London Posts: 14	I like it, even though I am not a great flash enthusiast. Red looks a bit too pale on my screen though.

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