Old 13-12-2007, 13:01   #1 (permalink)
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Flash Banners

After some comments & crits for a couple of flash banners I've designed

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Old 13-12-2007, 14:31   #2 (permalink)
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Classy banners, I like them.
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Old 13-12-2007, 15:31   #3 (permalink)
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Mate I can't fault them, nice one
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Old 13-12-2007, 21:52   #4 (permalink)
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Great colour choice. I hate it when designers default to blue hues for wintertime activities. These warm colours make me think of having a good time while looking ahead to summer.
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Old 14-12-2007, 04:02   #5 (permalink)
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Beautiful, finally some adverts that dont look like shit and will likely improve a lot of the sites they are on!
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Old 14-12-2007, 04:10   #6 (permalink)
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Very nice, I especially like the "2008" flowing from the champagne Bottle.

Good job!
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Old 15-12-2007, 06:04   #7 (permalink)
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Thanks everyone. Any crits?
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Old 19-12-2007, 16:09   #8 (permalink)
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Really good! Bravissimo!
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Old 19-12-2007, 22:58   #9 (permalink)
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wow, I was skeptical coming into this thread. but wow, nice work
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Old 20-12-2007, 05:25   #10 (permalink)
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i like them nice choice of colours..

some of your tweens arent straight enough, ie a sentence would swoop in from the top and while it goes down slowly it goes sideways a little..
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Old 20-12-2007, 07:19   #11 (permalink)
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Good work....very good work...
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Old 20-12-2007, 07:24   #12 (permalink)
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Very nice, bit heavy on the filesize for banners
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Old 20-12-2007, 07:24   #13 (permalink)
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Uhh, Buzz has a competitor. Like them.
My last one is a pile of shit
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Old 26-12-2007, 07:50   #14 (permalink)
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i like them nice choice of colours..

some of your tweens arent straight enough, ie a sentence would swoop in from the top and while it goes down slowly it goes sideways a little..

Thanks for all your comments people.

I took a look at the tweens and amended them as straight as poss. Cheers.

Final copy was signed off a few days ago. Bit of a knack to keep the file size low whilst looking good. 50KB or below appears to be the standard for flash banners.
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Old 26-12-2007, 16:30   #15 (permalink)
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Any crits?
Here's some.
Somehow noone mentioned it...
The bobbles don't really look like they should. Try to play more with transparency inside the radial fill (not just the object).

They need to be much more see-through. As they are - they look like marbles.

Apart from that... good job.
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Great colour choice. I hate it when designers default to blue hues for wintertime activities. These warm colours make me think of having a good time while looking ahead to summer.

I agree with you,we have the same feeling
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Old 04-01-2008, 04:20   #17 (permalink)
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I´m not a web designer and i dont have a f..king clue about this type of thing but i know what i like and these are great...good work
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