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Accurate · 13-12-2007, 13:01

After some comments & crits for a couple of flash banners I've designed

Flash Banners

Thanks

Spaced · 13-12-2007, 14:31

Classy banners, I like them.

rustybones · 13-12-2007, 15:31

Mate I can't fault them, nice one

Soup Of The Day · 13-12-2007, 21:52

Great colour choice. I hate it when designers default to blue hues for wintertime activities. These warm colours make me think of having a good time while looking ahead to summer.

Drewry · 14-12-2007, 04:02

Beautiful, finally some adverts that dont look like shit and will likely improve a lot of the sites they are on!

Liam · 14-12-2007, 04:10

Very nice, I especially like the "2008" flowing from the champagne Bottle.

Good job!

Accurate · 15-12-2007, 06:04

Thanks everyone. Any crits?

boroova · 19-12-2007, 16:09

Really good! Bravissimo!

veckd · 19-12-2007, 22:58

wow, I was skeptical coming into this thread. but wow, nice work

forbes · 20-12-2007, 05:25

i like them nice choice of colours..

some of your tweens arent straight enough, ie a sentence would swoop in from the top and while it goes down slowly it goes sideways a little..

i3lance · 20-12-2007, 07:19

Good work....very good work...

d*d · 20-12-2007, 07:24

Very nice, bit heavy on the filesize for banners

emil · 20-12-2007, 07:24

Uhh, Buzz has a competitor. Like them.
My last one is a pile of shit

Accurate · 26-12-2007, 07:50

Quote:

Originally Posted by forbes

i like them nice choice of colours..

some of your tweens arent straight enough, ie a sentence would swoop in from the top and while it goes down slowly it goes sideways a little..

Thanks for all your comments people.

I took a look at the tweens and amended them as straight as poss. Cheers.

Final copy was signed off a few days ago. Bit of a knack to keep the file size low whilst looking good. 50KB or below appears to be the standard for flash banners.

dorian · 26-12-2007, 16:30

Quote:

Originally Posted by Accurate

Any crits?

Here's some.
Somehow noone mentioned it...
The bobbles don't really look like they should. Try to play more with transparency inside the radial fill (not just the object).

They need to be much more see-through. As they are - they look like marbles.

Apart from that... good job.

badJohnny · 04-01-2008, 02:52

Quote:

Originally Posted by Soup Of The Day

Great colour choice. I hate it when designers default to blue hues for wintertime activities. These warm colours make me think of having a good time while looking ahead to summer.

I agree with you,we have the same feeling

robin · 04-01-2008, 04:20

I´m not a web designer and i dont have a f..king clue about this type of thing but i know what i like and these are great...good work

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Spaced eh? Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Winnipeg, MB Canada Posts: 113	Classy banners, I like them.

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rustybones corporate whore Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Umeå, Sweden Posts: 247	Mate I can't fault them, nice one

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Soup Of The Day Non Stop Pop Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Winnipeg, Canada Posts: 940	Great colour choice. I hate it when designers default to blue hues for wintertime activities. These warm colours make me think of having a good time while looking ahead to summer.

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Drewry Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Alabama, USA Posts: 298	Beautiful, finally some adverts that dont look like shit and will likely improve a lot of the sites they are on!

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boroova Registered User Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: London Posts: 14	Really good! Bravissimo!

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veckd www.veckd.com Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Cleveland, OH Posts: 40	wow, I was skeptical coming into this thread. but wow, nice work

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forbes Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Belfast Posts: 780	i like them nice choice of colours.. some of your tweens arent straight enough, ie a sentence would swoop in from the top and while it goes down slowly it goes sideways a little..

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d*d Moderator Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Bristol Posts: 3,285	Very nice, bit heavy on the filesize for banners

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robin Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 35	I´m not a web designer and i dont have a f..king clue about this type of thing but i know what i like and these are great...good work

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