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sarajs · 14-11-2007, 19:17

a leaflet i recently did. again constructive criticism is more than welcome

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v81/Sneaky_seal/dl_leaflet_members-1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v81/Sneaky_seal/dl_leaflet_members-2.jpg

datahound · 14-11-2007, 19:20

Liking that better than the first, but a lot more info to convey in the other I guess.

Very good.

sarajs · 14-11-2007, 19:33

thank you

FrostByte · 15-11-2007, 04:30

I don't think thats yoga the lady is doing on the cover. more like acrobatics :P
the purple hurts my eyes..

otherwise I like it

Hunch · 15-11-2007, 08:08

Quote:

Bring the angels into your life
With Joylina Goodings

Come along to this interactive workshop and learn how to bring the angels into your life to help you receive
what you want. You will go on a journey to meet your guardian angel as well as learning rituals to bring the
angels into your own life .

And people actually pay money to go to this shit?

datahound · 15-11-2007, 08:33

Angels are the new Reiki.

Herr Kurm · 15-11-2007, 08:38

Looks messy. Less weights, italics, bolds - use white space and colours. Do you know that you will not get that exact kind of purple gradient in offset print?

sarajs · 15-11-2007, 15:21

No I didn't thank you for informing me, always good to have helpful crit.

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sarajs Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Essex Posts: 877	dl leaflet a leaflet i recently did. again constructive criticism is more than welcome http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v81/Sneaky_seal/dl_leaflet_members-1.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v81/Sneaky_seal/dl_leaflet_members-2.jpg

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datahound Spare Parts Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Bracknell Forest Posts: 6,875	Liking that better than the first, but a lot more info to convey in the other I guess. Very good. __________________ poochmedia \| Computer Spare Parts \| Computer Disposals \| Telephone Disposals

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Herr Kurm ding dong Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tallinn, Estonia Posts: 4,165	Looks messy. Less weights, italics, bolds - use white space and colours. Do you know that you will not get that exact kind of purple gradient in offset print? __________________ Freelancer for hire. -portfolio-

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FrostByte Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 5	I don't think thats yoga the lady is doing on the cover. more like acrobatics :P the purple hurts my eyes.. otherwise I like it

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