Old 19-03-2004, 20:36   #1 (permalink)
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comments on degree work please

as part of my degree i have to make a web-site for a ficitonal new media company. Mine is based around producing work for the music industry. Here it is in its current state

http://www.joewebber.co.uk/work/thirteendotzero

Any help/comments/advice appreciated
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Old 19-03-2004, 21:22   #2 (permalink)
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that stripe looks like a giant *****
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Old 20-03-2004, 04:40   #3 (permalink)
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Nice, but is there any reason to why I have to click on the thriteendotcom-text to enter?

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Old 20-03-2004, 04:56   #4 (permalink)
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drop shadow looks a bit poor, but im ok with the design
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Old 20-03-2004, 05:01   #5 (permalink)
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yer i agree gray
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Old 20-03-2004, 05:04   #6 (permalink)
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lol how long did it take to make your avatar dixon ?
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Old 20-03-2004, 05:13   #7 (permalink)
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I'd say you need some more contrast between the cream and the white tabs. And the font you've used for the logo doesn't look great at that size.

Agree with thomaz about the splash page.
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Old 20-03-2004, 06:13   #8 (permalink)
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lol how long did it take to make your avatar dixon ?
deserves a prize that one does. good work dixon. made me laugh.
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Old 20-03-2004, 07:54   #9 (permalink)
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Clicked the link without reading the post.
What with the guitar man, I thought it was a band site* at first.
Is that a good thing? Probably not.

(* also getting faint echos of Simple Kid.)
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Old 20-03-2004, 08:55   #10 (permalink)
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Looking quite nice so far, maybe slim down the white line at the base a little, it's a little overpowering compared to the rest of the site. It always seems to me that maybe portfolio should come next in line to home, before services and team, just seems more important in the over-all hierarchy of what you'd expect from a design agency site.

Other than that it's a bit bare at the moment to comment. I'll keep my eyes peeled for the update though
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Old 20-03-2004, 10:58   #11 (permalink)
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I'd ditch the vector illus of the guitar player.
maybe a photo in it's place?.
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Old 25-03-2004, 19:51   #12 (permalink)
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