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Senior Member
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Exeter
Posts: 773
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comments on degree work please
as part of my degree i have to make a web-site for a ficitonal new media company. Mine is based around producing work for the music industry. Here it is in its current state http://www.joewebber.co.uk/work/thirteendotzero Any help/comments/advice appreciated |
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I Ain't Losing Any Sleep™
Join Date: Apr 2003
Posts: 5,200
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I'd say you need some more contrast between the cream and the white tabs. And the font you've used for the logo doesn't look great at that size. Agree with thomaz about the splash page. That's fuckin' ingenious, if I understand it correctly. It's a Swiss fuckin' watch.
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Iris Folder
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: smokey
Posts: 2,643
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Looking quite nice so far, maybe slim down the white line at the base a little, it's a little overpowering compared to the rest of the site. It always seems to me that maybe portfolio should come next in line to home, before services and team, just seems more important in the over-all hierarchy of what you'd expect from a design agency site. Other than that it's a bit bare at the moment to comment. I'll keep my eyes peeled for the update though |
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