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arbel · 03-05-2003, 08:02

Hello,
I'd like some feedback on my site and on my portfolio
Thanks
http://www.arbel-designs.com/main/index.html

Enjoy!

oli · 04-05-2003, 14:05

I think it has a bit too much text on the index page and the design looks a little dated.

tomson · 05-05-2003, 12:07

And maybe have a dictionary to hand next time

arbel · 05-05-2003, 12:31

why are there spelling mistakes?

smallbeer · 05-05-2003, 13:26

A little too much flashing around for my liking.

It could be really clean with all the white space around but the blurred images seem to ruin that.

Like Tomson said (in a round about kinda way

), a few grammatical and spelling errors kicking about.

[quote:67cc10cd4f]We service clients of all ranges from simple one page template designs and 460x60 advertising banners. To complete multimedia and
e-commerce sites.[/quote:67cc10cd4f]

Should really be...

We service clients of all ranges, from simple one page template designs and 460x60 advertising banners, to complete multimedia and
e-commerce sites.

excitant, mater ??

Flash should maybe have a capital F too.

That's just in the welcome paragraphs, I'll leave you to check the rest.

Sorry to be negative...I stopped smoking 2 days ago and I'm a little tense!

My gf has been taking the brunt of it!

hth

Jamie

lucidcreations · 06-05-2003, 04:57

I like it as a corporate design if thats the image your looking for.

Mr Fred · 06-05-2003, 05:12

[quote:539cea7a45]why are there spelling mistakes[/quote:539cea7a45]

dunno mate its your site

oli · 06-05-2003, 06:42

[quote:e396072a0c]I stopped smoking 2 days ago and I'm a little tense! [/quote:e396072a0c] get patches

I stopped about 7 weeks ago and it has been easy.

smallbeer · 06-05-2003, 09:17

[quote:37740f5e9d="oli"][quote:37740f5e9d]I stopped smoking 2 days ago and I'm a little tense! [/quote:37740f5e9d] get patches

I stopped about 7 weeks ago and it has been easy.[/quote:37740f5e9d]

I'm on them! I don't rate them much though. Everyone has there own method, for me I need something there and then when the craving is at it's worst. So for me it's oranges that have been helping - I'm going through a bag a day!

oli · 06-05-2003, 09:26

Do you find its hard to concentrate ? especially when designing - I did my first design in a month the other day when normally I would be doing a couple a week.

smallbeer · 06-05-2003, 10:08

[quote:5dcb9d07dd="oli"]Do you find its hard to concentrate ? especially when designing - I did my first design in a month the other day when normally I would be doing a couple a week.[/quote:5dcb9d07dd]

No I actually think it's helping me concentrate...or at least I have to keep myself busy, doing something. It's almost like meditation, staying in the here and now else my mind tricks me into forgeting I've quit. Over the last couple of days I've found myself sorting out all the little jobs around the house, getting my stuff in order, anything but smoking. It's bloody tiring!!!

And as I thought my weekend couldn't get any worse, Sunday night rolled around and where was 24!??!? Bloody snooker! I had to have 3 oranges in a row after that one!

lucidcreations · 06-05-2003, 12:20

if you like 24 you should go and see Phone Booth.....FANTASTIC! its 90mins ish real time.

oli · 06-05-2003, 12:25

yeah I've heard thats good as well ; a whole film set around a phone box

03-05-2003, 08:02	#1 (permalink)
arbel Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 2	Arbel Designs Hello, I'd like some feedback on my site and on my portfolio Thanks http://www.arbel-designs.com/main/index.html Enjoy!

04-05-2003, 14:05	#2 (permalink)
oli Free Ring Ding™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester Posts: 9,536	I think it has a bit too much text on the index page and the design looks a little dated. __________________ ..................

05-05-2003, 13:26	#5 (permalink)
smallbeer I Ain't Losing Any Sleep™ Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 5,236	A little too much flashing around for my liking. It could be really clean with all the white space around but the blurred images seem to ruin that. Like Tomson said (in a round about kinda way ), a few grammatical and spelling errors kicking about. [quote:67cc10cd4f]We service clients of all ranges from simple one page template designs and 460x60 advertising banners. To complete multimedia and e-commerce sites.[/quote:67cc10cd4f] Should really be... We service clients of all ranges, from simple one page template designs and 460x60 advertising banners, to complete multimedia and e-commerce sites. excitant, mater ?? Flash should maybe have a capital F too. That's just in the welcome paragraphs, I'll leave you to check the rest. Sorry to be negative...I stopped smoking 2 days ago and I'm a little tense! My gf has been taking the brunt of it! hth Jamie __________________ That's fuckin' ingenious, if I understand it correctly. It's a Swiss fuckin' watch.

06-05-2003, 04:57	#6 (permalink)
lucidcreations Part of the 3 out of 4 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: cheshire Posts: 2,081	I like it as a corporate design if thats the image your looking for. __________________ Jase

06-05-2003, 06:42	#8 (permalink)
oli Free Ring Ding™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester Posts: 9,536	[quote:e396072a0c]I stopped smoking 2 days ago and I'm a little tense! [/quote:e396072a0c] get patches I stopped about 7 weeks ago and it has been easy. __________________ ..................

05-05-2003, 12:07	#3 (permalink)
tomson hairball Join Date: May 2003 Location: Middle Class, Green Belt Heaven Posts: 3,161	And maybe have a dictionary to hand next time

05-05-2003, 12:31	#4 (permalink)
arbel Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 2	why are there spelling mistakes?

06-05-2003, 05:12	#7 (permalink)
Mr Fred Magazines™ Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Glasgow.. Posts: 11,276	[quote:539cea7a45]why are there spelling mistakes[/quote:539cea7a45] dunno mate its your site

06-05-2003, 09:17	#9 (permalink)
smallbeer I Ain't Losing Any Sleep™ Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 5,236	[quote:37740f5e9d="oli"][quote:37740f5e9d]I stopped smoking 2 days ago and I'm a little tense! [/quote:37740f5e9d] get patches I stopped about 7 weeks ago and it has been easy.[/quote:37740f5e9d] I'm on them! I don't rate them much though. Everyone has there own method, for me I need something there and then when the craving is at it's worst. So for me it's oranges that have been helping - I'm going through a bag a day! __________________ That's fuckin' ingenious, if I understand it correctly. It's a Swiss fuckin' watch.

06-05-2003, 09:26	#10 (permalink)
oli Free Ring Ding™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester Posts: 9,536	Do you find its hard to concentrate ? especially when designing - I did my first design in a month the other day when normally I would be doing a couple a week. __________________ ..................

06-05-2003, 10:08	#11 (permalink)
smallbeer I Ain't Losing Any Sleep™ Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 5,236	[quote:5dcb9d07dd="oli"]Do you find its hard to concentrate ? especially when designing - I did my first design in a month the other day when normally I would be doing a couple a week.[/quote:5dcb9d07dd] No I actually think it's helping me concentrate...or at least I have to keep myself busy, doing something. It's almost like meditation, staying in the here and now else my mind tricks me into forgeting I've quit. Over the last couple of days I've found myself sorting out all the little jobs around the house, getting my stuff in order, anything but smoking. It's bloody tiring!!! And as I thought my weekend couldn't get any worse, Sunday night rolled around and where was 24!??!? Bloody snooker! I had to have 3 oranges in a row after that one! __________________ That's fuckin' ingenious, if I understand it correctly. It's a Swiss fuckin' watch.

06-05-2003, 12:20	#12 (permalink)
lucidcreations Part of the 3 out of 4 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: cheshire Posts: 2,081	if you like 24 you should go and see Phone Booth.....FANTASTIC! its 90mins ish real time. __________________ Jase

06-05-2003, 12:25	#13 (permalink)
oli Free Ring Ding™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester Posts: 9,536	yeah I've heard thats good as well ; a whole film set around a phone box __________________ ..................

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