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pixelenvy · 26-09-2007, 10:17

Hey guys, I am looking for some advanced critiquing on this layout. Mainly typography. Although, any feedback would be greatly appreciated

Please have a peak at it:
http://www.pixelenvy.net/projects/jo..._proposal2.png

This is for a free seminar given by a prominent author in Australia, targeting corporate executives in the $50,000 - $150,000 salary range (assume what you must.. 30 to 50, male, etc).

Thanks so much!

EDIT: The link should be working now, sorry about that!

Drewry · 26-09-2007, 18:28

the link doesn't work for me.

bneub · 26-09-2007, 22:42

me either.

cowandmonkey · 27-09-2007, 08:53

link not working

pixelenvy · 27-09-2007, 12:42

Okay, fixed.. sorry about that!

rglover · 27-09-2007, 13:33

Looking good. A little confused about the title of the seminar, but the design is looking really nice. Very classic.

Do Gooder · 27-09-2007, 14:08

"looking for a professional critique"

I'll just get me coat.

Drewry · 27-09-2007, 15:07

good but the title of the seminar is confusing.. move the ampersand.

RaelRode · 27-09-2007, 16:12

Personally, I would left align or possibly justify the clients type. Oh and, you really should start sentences with capital letters.

Quote:

what you don't have, you can obtain;
what you don't know...et al

foomex · 27-09-2007, 16:24

Quote:

Originally Posted by rglover

...Very classic.

ditto.

and I'm also positive on the "&".

pixelenvy · 28-09-2007, 08:18

Thanks a bunch for the feedback you guys! It is turning out to be a really awesome layout! Just needs a lil' more work!

26-09-2007, 10:17	#1 (permalink)
pixelenvy I like pretty. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Indianapolis, IN Posts: 61	New layout.. Looking for a professional critique Hey guys, I am looking for some advanced critiquing on this layout. Mainly typography. Although, any feedback would be greatly appreciated Please have a peak at it: http://www.pixelenvy.net/projects/jo..._proposal2.png This is for a free seminar given by a prominent author in Australia, targeting corporate executives in the $50,000 - $150,000 salary range (assume what you must.. 30 to 50, male, etc). Thanks so much! EDIT: The link should be working now, sorry about that! Last edited by pixelenvy : 27-09-2007 at 12:41.

27-09-2007, 13:33	#6 (permalink)
rglover asleep at the trigger Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Ohio Posts: 229	Looking good. A little confused about the title of the seminar, but the design is looking really nice. Very classic. __________________ twitter.com/rglover

27-09-2007, 14:08	#7 (permalink)
Do Gooder Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 5,057	"looking for a professional critique" I'll just get me coat. __________________ anti social marketing

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26-09-2007, 18:28	#2 (permalink)
Drewry Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Alabama, USA Posts: 298	the link doesn't work for me.

26-09-2007, 22:42	#3 (permalink)
bneub Registered User Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 4	me either.

27-09-2007, 08:53	#4 (permalink)
cowandmonkey Registered User Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 24	link not working

27-09-2007, 12:42	#5 (permalink)
pixelenvy I like pretty. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Indianapolis, IN Posts: 61	Okay, fixed.. sorry about that!

27-09-2007, 15:07	#8 (permalink)
Drewry Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Alabama, USA Posts: 298	good but the title of the seminar is confusing.. move the ampersand.

28-09-2007, 08:18	#11 (permalink)
pixelenvy I like pretty. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Indianapolis, IN Posts: 61	Thanks a bunch for the feedback you guys! It is turning out to be a really awesome layout! Just needs a lil' more work!

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