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Kemp · 24-07-2007, 14:05

www.jamesckemp.com/test/bridge6.jpg

Heka1 · 24-07-2007, 14:18

Its a great pics so far the only thing i think that could make it go even further is to add more detail to little areas around the picture, it will make your eyes follow the vanishing lines like you have and then move about in the picture, and i think you need some lines or something on the street to make it less dull looking. great work.

Kemp · 24-07-2007, 14:56

yeh im still experimenting with more detail, still thinking about doing windows but that'll take sooo long, but im sure itd be worth it

Kemp · 24-07-2007, 16:00

here it is with a bit more deatail

http://www.jamesckemp.com/test/bridge6.jpg

steveb · 24-07-2007, 17:09

Starting to look good! Those lights are still odd, to my mind - gray globes emitting light.

Kemp · 24-07-2007, 17:19

ok, i'll make them more white and transparent?
they wouldnt be invisible tho, they are already pretty transparent!

Kemp · 24-07-2007, 17:26

try checking it now

Heka1 · 24-07-2007, 18:48

Steveb is right, the globes are too bright. make them almost totally transparent,

RaelRode · 24-07-2007, 19:28

Its lookign good but the globes look wierd. Make the white since they'll look really bright then.

Kemp · 24-07-2007, 19:59

i changed the "globes", u still think they're wrong? they are different from when he mentioned them, lights in the street arent totally transparent, then there wouldnt be any light!

RaelRode · 24-07-2007, 20:03

Hmmm, the lights far away in the distance look good IMO. But the ones that appear closer t us still seem grey.

Kemp · 24-07-2007, 20:07

ok, i'll see what i can do, u are look at the new link not the old one yeah?

www.jamesckemp.com/test/bridge6.jpg

RaelRode · 24-07-2007, 20:36

Oh ok, yea thats much better. That'll teach me for not reading the thread properly :p

Heka1 · 25-07-2007, 00:51

it is looking a lot better, now add more detail to the bridge part

steveb · 25-07-2007, 02:15

Better! The globes themselves need to be 100% white - like in a photo where the light source is totally burnt out. Then there's a glow (the same color as the light) around the globe which is where the transparency comes in. The glow is caused by humidity and impurities in the air, of course.

Kemp · 25-07-2007, 08:01

the globes are 100% white! then there is a glow around them, i think they look good now lol

steveb · 25-07-2007, 09:47

Told ya!

Kemp · 25-07-2007, 10:08

it does look better like taht, do u prefer it?

Kemp · 25-07-2007, 10:09

anyone else loving the birds on the bridge?!

gomes · 25-07-2007, 10:58

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kemp_1987

anyone else loving the birds on the bridge?!

I think the bird on the right looks a bit weird...the wing doesnt feel right..like the other 2 though

24-07-2007, 14:05	#1 (permalink)
Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	just the picture ive been working on www.jamesckemp.com/test/bridge6.jpg Last edited by Kemp : 25-07-2007 at 10:15.

24-07-2007, 17:09	#5 (permalink)
steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 5,475	Starting to look good! Those lights are still odd, to my mind - gray globes emitting light. __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

24-07-2007, 19:28	#9 (permalink)
RaelRode Designers are strange :) Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Shrewsbury, UK Posts: 1,769	Its lookign good but the globes look wierd. Make the white since they'll look really bright then. __________________ [ Programmers Voice - Blog about the internet, code and development ]

24-07-2007, 20:03	#11 (permalink)
RaelRode Designers are strange :) Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Shrewsbury, UK Posts: 1,769	Hmmm, the lights far away in the distance look good IMO. But the ones that appear closer t us still seem grey. __________________ [ Programmers Voice - Blog about the internet, code and development ]

24-07-2007, 20:36	#13 (permalink)
RaelRode Designers are strange :) Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Shrewsbury, UK Posts: 1,769	Oh ok, yea thats much better. That'll teach me for not reading the thread properly :p __________________ [ Programmers Voice - Blog about the internet, code and development ]

24-07-2007, 14:18	#2 (permalink)
Heka1 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 179	Its a great pics so far the only thing i think that could make it go even further is to add more detail to little areas around the picture, it will make your eyes follow the vanishing lines like you have and then move about in the picture, and i think you need some lines or something on the street to make it less dull looking. great work.

24-07-2007, 14:56	#3 (permalink)
Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	yeh im still experimenting with more detail, still thinking about doing windows but that'll take sooo long, but im sure itd be worth it

24-07-2007, 16:00	#4 (permalink)
Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	here it is with a bit more deatail http://www.jamesckemp.com/test/bridge6.jpg

24-07-2007, 17:19	#6 (permalink)
Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	ok, i'll make them more white and transparent? they wouldnt be invisible tho, they are already pretty transparent!

24-07-2007, 17:26	#7 (permalink)
Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	try checking it now

24-07-2007, 18:48	#8 (permalink)
Heka1 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 179	Steveb is right, the globes are too bright. make them almost totally transparent,

24-07-2007, 19:59	#10 (permalink)
Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	i changed the "globes", u still think they're wrong? they are different from when he mentioned them, lights in the street arent totally transparent, then there wouldnt be any light!

24-07-2007, 20:07	#12 (permalink)
Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	ok, i'll see what i can do, u are look at the new link not the old one yeah? www.jamesckemp.com/test/bridge6.jpg

25-07-2007, 00:51	#14 (permalink)
Heka1 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 179	it is looking a lot better, now add more detail to the bridge part

25-07-2007, 02:15	#15 (permalink)
steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 5,475	Better! The globes themselves need to be 100% white - like in a photo where the light source is totally burnt out. Then there's a glow (the same color as the light) around the globe which is where the transparency comes in. The glow is caused by humidity and impurities in the air, of course. __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

25-07-2007, 08:01	#16 (permalink)
Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	the globes are 100% white! then there is a glow around them, i think they look good now lol

25-07-2007, 09:47	#17 (permalink)
steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 5,475	Told ya! __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

25-07-2007, 10:08	#18 (permalink)
Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	it does look better like taht, do u prefer it?

25-07-2007, 10:09	#19 (permalink)
Kemp Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 1,899	anyone else loving the birds on the bridge?!

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