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Snowshiro · 14-06-2007, 20:12

Is 4 a stick of seaside rock?

emil · 15-06-2007, 01:57

1. although you can do better.

steveb · 15-06-2007, 02:15

The first is the most stylish - it's clean, the colours are good together and the whirly bit looks quality. The rest are a bit too gimmicky but the seagull adds a nice touch.

sub · 15-06-2007, 04:53

Thanks all for the feedback.
Just to clarify, 4th version isn't going to be put forward as a concept.
I was really just playing with an idea. Totally not suitable.

And yes, it's a character based on a stick of rock candy.

Mitch · 15-06-2007, 05:04

Is it technology based?

Mitch · 15-06-2007, 05:07

Quote:

Originally Posted by sub

Thanks all for the feedback.
Just to clarify, 4th version isn't going to be put forward as a concept.
I was really just playing with an idea. Totally not suitable.

And yes, it's a character based on a stick of rock candy.

Is he totally your own illy? If so I like him anyway.

sub · 15-06-2007, 05:13

Aye. Did a series of them a while ago for a Brighton based character comp.

Quote:

Is it technology based?

It's for an 'invitation only' geektastic event which occurs in different areas around the work.
Open source programming and alike - in the same vein as FooCamp.

Mitch · 15-06-2007, 05:24

Maybe the gay pride colours are a no no then. Don't think it would appreciated to much by the customer.

In this case, I would go for 1, but give it more clout by simplifying the waves, maybe try and focus on the neg space of the lines too to give it more interest?

But then the seagull could work nicely in a speacial google-esque way.

jack · 15-06-2007, 05:29

Definitely 1 mate, 2 a bit too 'gay pride' and the 3/4 are just a wee bit to busy for me.

sub · 15-06-2007, 05:31

Customer? It's a freebie!
Good suggestions. I'll polish artwork following feedback.

Regarding the gayness of opt 2, baring in mind the majority of folk attending this event will be coming from outside Brighton, what is the first thing people think when Brighton is mentioned?

freelancr · 15-06-2007, 05:36

Quote:

Originally Posted by sub

what is the first thing people think when Brighton is mentioned?

or

sorry

steveb · 15-06-2007, 09:33

A beach made of cobbles with a nice view of Hove gasworks.

Lyaksej · 15-06-2007, 14:38

nice logos

datahound · 15-06-2007, 15:12

That palace thing with the iced gems on top.

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steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 4,423	The first is the most stylish - it's clean, the colours are good together and the whirly bit looks quality. The rest are a bit too gimmicky but the seagull adds a nice touch. __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

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sub Shitcasket™ Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Brighton Posts: 3,894	Thanks all for the feedback. Just to clarify, 4th version isn't going to be put forward as a concept. I was really just playing with an idea. Totally not suitable. And yes, it's a character based on a stick of rock candy. __________________ Freelance Brighton \| Design Agency Brighton \| Twitter \| Linkedin \| Plurk Follow DT updates on Twitter: http://twitter.com/designerstalk

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sub Shitcasket™ Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Brighton Posts: 3,894	Customer? It's a freebie! Good suggestions. I'll polish artwork following feedback. Regarding the gayness of opt 2, baring in mind the majority of folk attending this event will be coming from outside Brighton, what is the first thing people think when Brighton is mentioned? __________________ Freelance Brighton \| Design Agency Brighton \| Twitter \| Linkedin \| Plurk Follow DT updates on Twitter: http://twitter.com/designerstalk

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Snowshiro Will work for Marmite Join Date: May 2007 Location: Sapporo, Japan Posts: 574	Is 4 a stick of seaside rock?

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Mitch Chavtastic Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 1,423	Maybe the gay pride colours are a no no then. Don't think it would appreciated to much by the customer. In this case, I would go for 1, but give it more clout by simplifying the waves, maybe try and focus on the neg space of the lines too to give it more interest? But then the seagull could work nicely in a speacial google-esque way.

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steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 4,423	A beach made of cobbles with a nice view of Hove gasworks. __________________ My free fonts www.utfi.net

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Lyaksej Registered User Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Ukraine Posts: 20	nice logos

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