[vern231181]

Hi guys,

could you kindly give me some quick feed back on this logo.

i am kinda swaying to the green on the far right

cheers

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[babydutka]

nice I like it! The tracking on "crazy campers" seems just a tad tight. Especially with the spacious "van hire" below.

As for colours - I think either the green or the pink/red best represents crazy.

EDIT: Oh and one thing I just noticed is that although I like the green the best, the black "campers" is more prominent than the green "crazy" but in the pink/red version they seem to balance out a bit better. Just a thought.

[jameszxcv]

i like,
i would make the "van hire" spacing a bit closer together

green one for me

[vern231181]

cheers for the comments so far guys.

keep em coming.

i do agree with both your comments and TBH i will probably close up the tracking on van hire so it's more in sync with the crazycampers.

[MJ07]

Fab, love it - pink one!

[steveb]

The green you're using is a bit muddy. I agree with James, close the gap in VAN HIRE.
I like it! I wonder if it would be possible to simplify the VW Bus even more while keeping it instantly recognizable. For example, get rid of the wing mirrors, door handle, hub cap details.

[pgo]

Agree with most of what's been said. I like the green one and the pink one. Green best, though.

[Herr Kurm]

Loose the details somehow. Overall pretty decent

[R1gM]

I like it. Green does look good and I agree on the letter spacing on van hire.

[vern231181]

Thanks for all your comments guys, I think I will go with the green one and attempt to lose the details without losing the overall appeal. I'll post my revised version up tomorrow when i'm back in work.

Thanks again

[RaelRode]

Yes, the green is best!!! Waiting to see newer version....

[t3amBrian]

The text looks like it was vertically stretched and the spacing on crazy campers seems a little too tight.

I couldn't tell you which color is my favorite. I like them all.

[hawken]

bit detailed init

[adpitch]

Nice. But the car needs to be less realistic. Make it 1.0 cm large, print it. It has to be clear enough

[Mitch]

I also feel you should loose the detail. You have classic styling on the split screens that could work well as a mark instead of an illustration.

[vern231181]

Cheers for the further comments guys.

There's quite a few points to consider, I will remove some detailing but I'm not totally convinced by doing this.

The comment of making the van 10mm large is not a possibility, think it will lose it's prominence as the van is the focal point.

Cheers though

[Mitch]

Originally Posted by vern231181

The comment of making the van 10mm large is not a possibility, think it will lose it's prominence as the van is the focal point.

I think what was meant does it work at business card size? Or in mono?

Originally Posted by vern231181

There's quite a few points to consider, I will remove some detailing but I'm not totally convinced by doing this.

The detailing mentioned also refers to the logos usability....

It needs to work at all sizes on defferent media basically.

[vern231181]

I always create my logos 100mm x 100mm, within them peramiters that is ideal for stationery etc and it's not that often you go any smaller than that, unless you're a link in the footer of a website. To say that a logo would be scaled down to 10mm would be illegible no matter what it's make up?

[manulo1]

i like it, but i think if you put more space in the letters of van hire could be better, but its nice! i love the pink

[vern231181]

cheers manulo and everyone,

i'm gonna have to leave this thread now as I'm under time restrictions on this job and I really need to get on with finalising the logo and implementing it into a web proof.

Thanks for all your constructive comments