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aceofspades · 30-04-2007, 15:08

How it going guy? I new to this site and glad to be a member. Being that I am a web designer I hope to receive and give valuable feedback.... Anyway can you designer plz take a looksy at my website and give me alittle feedback....

andrewcedwards.com/my_site(improved but content hasn't been added)

I also have the orginal : andrewcedwards.com old version has some content)

Thanks

babydutka · 30-04-2007, 16:37

Hmm ok I'm not sure what you changed in the second one other than that it has a new top nav...

Anyhow. Portfolio is spelt wrong.

Here are a few other things I'd suggest just by quickly looking at the site:

- Learn CSS and XHTML. Layout with CSS and style with it - not need for the messy code that is on the site and <h1> tags with   inbetween them.
- Get rid of the GoDaddy banner. If you are serious about it, just get some cheap hosting for $5 a month.
- not a big fan of the triple navigation on three parts of the page, but that might just be a personal thing.
- colours: really dark and don't seem to jive that well. Can you liven it up a bit?
- You are using really small body type in comparison to the headers and such. I'd bump that up a bit.

All the best!

aceofspades · 30-04-2007, 16:42

yea....im just starting to learn how to design wit CSS.....i made this design when all i knew was designing with tables.

I noticed I spelled portfolio wrong too...Opps

Yea i am gonna get rid of the banner.....just practicing right now thats why I havent decided to pay for it.

babydutka · 07-05-2007, 08:59

cool - well keep working away - practice makes perfect! (however overused that is

)

solix · 07-05-2007, 09:24

Looks dated..

flasherr · 08-05-2007, 04:29

as babydutka said: learn CSS and (X)HTML and design principles
then from theory go to practice (and still learn theory)

never mind, most of first pages look like from 90-ties

30-04-2007, 15:08	#1 (permalink)
aceofspades Time is Money Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Fort Lauderdale Posts: 36	Portfolio Site How it going guy? I new to this site and glad to be a member. Being that I am a web designer I hope to receive and give valuable feedback.... Anyway can you designer plz take a looksy at my website and give me alittle feedback.... andrewcedwards.com/my_site(improved but content hasn't been added) I also have the orginal : andrewcedwards.com old version has some content) Thanks Last edited by aceofspades : 30-04-2007 at 15:41.

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solix hello Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Holland Posts: 569	Looks dated.. __________________ w00t

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30-04-2007, 16:37	#2 (permalink)
babydutka what sarah said Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Ontario, Canada Posts: 204	Hmm ok I'm not sure what you changed in the second one other than that it has a new top nav... Anyhow. Portfolio is spelt wrong. Here are a few other things I'd suggest just by quickly looking at the site: - Learn CSS and XHTML. Layout with CSS and style with it - not need for the messy code that is on the site and <h1> tags with   inbetween them. - Get rid of the GoDaddy banner. If you are serious about it, just get some cheap hosting for $5 a month. - not a big fan of the triple navigation on three parts of the page, but that might just be a personal thing. - colours: really dark and don't seem to jive that well. Can you liven it up a bit? - You are using really small body type in comparison to the headers and such. I'd bump that up a bit. All the best!

30-04-2007, 16:42	#3 (permalink)
aceofspades Time is Money Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Fort Lauderdale Posts: 36	yea....im just starting to learn how to design wit CSS.....i made this design when all i knew was designing with tables. I noticed I spelled portfolio wrong too...Opps Yea i am gonna get rid of the banner.....just practicing right now thats why I havent decided to pay for it.

07-05-2007, 08:59	#4 (permalink)
babydutka what sarah said Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Ontario, Canada Posts: 204	cool - well keep working away - practice makes perfect! (however overused that is )

08-05-2007, 04:29	#6 (permalink)
flasherr latvian Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Latvia, Riga Posts: 20	as babydutka said: learn CSS and (X)HTML and design principles then from theory go to practice (and still learn theory) never mind, most of first pages look like from 90-ties

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