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ovsiyenko · 14-03-2007, 22:11

Please review website i have made (choiceofcreditcards.com)

This is my first work.

Thank you

tobes · 14-03-2007, 22:15

Not a big supporter of the highlighted style text. I kept trying to deselect it. :P

Also I think it needs a more prominent header graphic.

amitrampal · 14-03-2007, 22:55

1. Put graphic element right on top make viewers understand where they have landed. Some kind of logo or something.

2.Not a great fan of highlighted text.

3. Tabs used to differentiate pages should be separated.

Cheers,

finbarr · 15-03-2007, 05:38

the highlighted text is just plain bizarre

cocknose · 15-03-2007, 05:46

my eyes just goes all over the place, hierarchy needs alot of attention

leeb · 15-03-2007, 05:47

All of the above. First time I've seen the highlighted text. Makes recognising links really difficult...

e.boal · 15-03-2007, 06:33

What everyone above has said...I have had a bit of read and I know what the site is about. The design tells me nothing...there is no signpost as to what the content is about immediately...the title of the page could be much more helpful and the navigation for me is lost on the page.

Make it clear what your site has to offer the user!

emmajg · 15-03-2007, 15:26

I agree with the above. Ditch the highlighted text and get yourself a strong header graphic and/or logo.

I would also put the smaller column on the right, with the main content on the left side.

Looking at the source code.. if you specify heights and widths you need to specify units eg. em, px, not just a number.

In addition, l I think you are mis-using CSS. Putting everything in Span tags is really not good practice. In an ideal world all CSS commands would be external, you shouldn't be adding 'style=' to every bit of code. Why not just get on with it and use tables?!

joey · 15-03-2007, 16:22

Everything I'd recommend is what everyone already said. Do that.

babydutka · 15-03-2007, 16:50

Quote:

Originally Posted by emmajg

Putting everything in Span tags is really not good practice.

A result of using the design view of Dreamweaver to style everything? If so, ovsiyenko, learn to code it yourself so you can stop Dreamweaver from bloating your code.

2Dfruit · 15-03-2007, 20:13

breaks in IE6

rmagnuson · 16-03-2007, 18:41

It's already been said, but the highlighted text has got to go. Other than that, it's very business like. I can see a high powered business person giving it more than just a passing glance.

brewern · 16-03-2007, 20:38

I'de have to agree with everyone, good job on your first site though

vdesigns · 17-03-2007, 08:42

I think you need to consider the following points:

-There is no logo.
-Text is highlighted.
-Some boxes have broken boundaries.

Arjun
www.vraxs.com

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tobes Chasing cars. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Gold Coast, Australia. Posts: 14	Not a big supporter of the highlighted style text. I kept trying to deselect it. :P Also I think it needs a more prominent header graphic.

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amitrampal Pixel Inc. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 71	1. Put graphic element right on top make viewers understand where they have landed. Some kind of logo or something. 2.Not a great fan of highlighted text. 3. Tabs used to differentiate pages should be separated. Cheers,

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leeb Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 116	All of the above. First time I've seen the highlighted text. Makes recognising links really difficult...

15-03-2007, 06:33	#7 (permalink)
e.boal Loveable loser. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Newcastle Posts: 231	What everyone above has said...I have had a bit of read and I know what the site is about. The design tells me nothing...there is no signpost as to what the content is about immediately...the title of the page could be much more helpful and the navigation for me is lost on the page. Make it clear what your site has to offer the user!

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emmajg Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: York/ London Posts: 48	I agree with the above. Ditch the highlighted text and get yourself a strong header graphic and/or logo. I would also put the smaller column on the right, with the main content on the left side. Looking at the source code.. if you specify heights and widths you need to specify units eg. em, px, not just a number. In addition, l I think you are mis-using CSS. Putting everything in Span tags is really not good practice. In an ideal world all CSS commands would be external, you shouldn't be adding 'style=' to every bit of code. Why not just get on with it and use tables?!

15-03-2007, 16:22	#9 (permalink)
joey Joey™ Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: California Posts: 1,081	Everything I'd recommend is what everyone already said. Do that.

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2Dfruit Biscuit Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Ireland Posts: 985	breaks in IE6

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rmagnuson Registered User Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: California Posts: 19	It's already been said, but the highlighted text has got to go. Other than that, it's very business like. I can see a high powered business person giving it more than just a passing glance.

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brewern Registered User Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 19	I'de have to agree with everyone, good job on your first site though

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vdesigns Registered User Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 91	I think you need to consider the following points: -There is no logo. -Text is highlighted. -Some boxes have broken boundaries. Arjun www.vraxs.com

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