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stickmus · 06-03-2007, 08:40

Yay or nay for another redesign attempt:

Thanks

pat · 06-03-2007, 10:15

ooof dear me, definitely not. Too big, clumsy/cobbled looking.

ionicwings · 06-03-2007, 10:17

nay...

agree with pat.. sorry

steveb · 06-03-2007, 10:23

Was in Himmel... What are you trying to create here? The logo looks great - no idea what the letters are - "gsgd" mayhap? Ten points for colour. Why spoil a smart typographical whatever with pictures? Would they show something no-one has seen before or would they be space filler? And if you have some nicely proportioned white space, why fill it?

pgo · 06-03-2007, 10:39

I don't care for it, but it's not without its good points. The logo isn't bad.

I see no harm in pushing it a little further.

Quote:

Originally Posted by steveb

"gsgd" mayhap?

Yes.

2Dfruit · 06-03-2007, 18:55

I agree with pat, but I do like the logo

wheedwacker · 06-03-2007, 20:37

jase1000 · 06-03-2007, 20:48

The logo looks like a Pacman orgie - I don't hate it but reckon it could do with some refinement.

Otherwise it's all a bit half-arsed isn't it?

I think you really ought to develop the idea a bit further before folk can give a proper feedback.

estazor · 06-03-2007, 21:45

Definitely push it further. It looks too bland honestly.

amitrampal · 06-03-2007, 22:26

Logo Yay....typo nay....color nay.....

Muzjik · 06-03-2007, 23:11

Hurts eyes. Thats all i really have to say. It might just be me though.

d*d · 07-03-2007, 03:39

I know you're called 'George Smith Graphic Design' but do you have to use a form of GSGD as your logo?

stickmus · 07-03-2007, 09:15

Haha, just got this PM:

Quote:

Different Forum
I have noticed a couple of posts where you have been treated badly because of your designs, I am sure you will find the community at http://design-forum.editboard.com much more accepting!!

Thanks, Caz

Screw you guys I'm going to see Caz. He'll tell me it's purty.

stickmus · 07-03-2007, 09:18

Quote:

Originally Posted by d*d

I know you're called 'George Smith Graphic Design' but do you have to use a form of GSGD as your logo?

No I don't, but I want to. What don't you like about it?

Dusteh · 07-03-2007, 09:22

hahaha, is that their mission statement?

design-forum.editboard.com
Home of shit designers who can't take criticism.

Anyway, I like the logo - the colours might work as well if the layout was better. Hating the typo for 'graphic and web design'.

emil · 07-03-2007, 09:23

Haha, you suck! (let's see what type of invitation this brings you)

I think the logo could work, maybe with looser tracking and a tad more tinkering of the letterforms.

I generally like yellow, but this one has a greenish tint that makes it look like an illness. I think.

On another note, you're spending too much time on it, just get something online and get it over with. You've had a few decent designs so far, but haven't implemented either. Designing for yourself is always difficult and most of the time counter-productive.

Take a break from it now. It'll come.

d*d · 07-03-2007, 09:26

Quote:

Originally Posted by stickmus

No I don't, but I want to. What don't you like about it?

Nothing in particular I just remember trying to make a logo using D,J,G & D and found that it was a particularly awkward logo to compose so I opted for another route - the amount of redesigns I see you making with yours I figured you were finding the same thing

d*d · 07-03-2007, 09:30

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dusteh

design-forum.editboard.com
Home of shit designers who can't take criticism.

Looks like centereed
http://www.designerstalk.com/forums/member.php?u=5896
has jumped ship to be an admin there

stickmus · 07-03-2007, 10:13

Message was from TJS WebDesign

stealthcow · 07-03-2007, 11:03

stop being lazy

06-03-2007, 08:40	#1 (permalink)
stickmus hmmm... Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Yorkuk Posts: 2,130	Not again Yay or nay for another redesign attempt: Thanks __________________ George Smith - a vain attempt to get higher on google for my name

06-03-2007, 10:15	#2 (permalink)
pat jorge regula Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: B'ham/Leeds Posts: 4,820	ooof dear me, definitely not. Too big, clumsy/cobbled looking. __________________

06-03-2007, 20:48	#8 (permalink)
jase1000 turd 2.0 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Right on your tit end Posts: 1,166	The logo looks like a Pacman orgie - I don't hate it but reckon it could do with some refinement. Otherwise it's all a bit half-arsed isn't it? I think you really ought to develop the idea a bit further before folk can give a proper feedback. __________________ Stand Free

07-03-2007, 09:22	#15 (permalink)
Dusteh Sir digby chicken caesar Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 4,393	hahaha, is that their mission statement? design-forum.editboard.com Home of shit designers who can't take criticism. Anyway, I like the logo - the colours might work as well if the layout was better. Hating the typo for 'graphic and web design'. __________________ unconsolidated isoparms

07-03-2007, 09:23	#16 (permalink)
emil dt immigrant Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bucharest - Romania Posts: 6,830	Haha, you suck! (let's see what type of invitation this brings you) I think the logo could work, maybe with looser tracking and a tad more tinkering of the letterforms. I generally like yellow, but this one has a greenish tint that makes it look like an illness. I think. On another note, you're spending too much time on it, just get something online and get it over with. You've had a few decent designs so far, but haven't implemented either. Designing for yourself is always difficult and most of the time counter-productive. Take a break from it now. It'll come. __________________ SEPTEMBER Q X R

06-03-2007, 10:17	#3 (permalink)
ionicwings (^---^)\m/ Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Philippines Posts: 57	nay... agree with pat.. sorry

06-03-2007, 10:23	#4 (permalink)
steveb 389 ppm and rising Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Järvenpää, Finland Posts: 4,522	Was in Himmel... What are you trying to create here? The logo looks great - no idea what the letters are - "gsgd" mayhap? Ten points for colour. Why spoil a smart typographical whatever with pictures? Would they show something no-one has seen before or would they be space filler? And if you have some nicely proportioned white space, why fill it?

06-03-2007, 18:55	#6 (permalink)
2Dfruit Biscuit Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Ireland Posts: 923	I agree with pat, but I do like the logo

06-03-2007, 20:37	#7 (permalink)
wheedwacker competitionmaster 2.0 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: USA Posts: 1,370	nay

06-03-2007, 21:45	#9 (permalink)
estazor Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 74	Definitely push it further. It looks too bland honestly.

06-03-2007, 22:26	#10 (permalink)
amitrampal Pixel Inc. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 71	Logo Yay....typo nay....color nay.....

06-03-2007, 23:11	#11 (permalink)
Muzjik Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 70	Hurts eyes. Thats all i really have to say. It might just be me though.

07-03-2007, 03:39	#12 (permalink)
d*d Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Bristol Posts: 3,155	I know you're called 'George Smith Graphic Design' but do you have to use a form of GSGD as your logo?

07-03-2007, 10:13	#19 (permalink)
stickmus hmmm... Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Yorkuk Posts: 2,130	Message was from TJS WebDesign __________________ George Smith - a vain attempt to get higher on google for my name

07-03-2007, 11:03	#20 (permalink)
stealthcow knocking heads Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: London, UK Posts: 1,905	stop being lazy

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