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04-03-2007, 02:22
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Join Date: Mar 2007
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Comments Please
Hi all, I am new here but i have been lurking around for a wile now and i have learned a great deal. I thought I would see what you guys think of my first website, I am following instructions from one of those make money form home ebooks, it has taken me 2 and a half week to get it to where it is now (pathetic i know). any comments or suggestion would be greatly appreciated as i am sure it has a lot of flaws but i dont know what they are, and from what i have read in these forums you guys will have no trouble pointing them out. i used photoshop and dreamweaver. Kind Regards, Simon. workathomeworldsite.com |
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05-03-2007, 02:02
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Join Date: Mar 2007
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thanks for the replys guys. that bad ha. i wont be insulted, even if it goes on the list for the worlds worst ever sites. i need to know what is wrong with it so i can learn, i wont learn anything if everyone just told me it was great. so please i dont mind if the comment are positive or negative i would love to hear every one's opinions. ha wheedwacker, what is it that is wrong with the header? size, colour, font? or does the hole header need to binned and redone? |
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07-03-2007, 05:26
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Senior Member
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 100
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I can't remember the original so can't really comment on whether it's better or not - but it's still not great. Stretching type is a designer's no-no and a lazy solution to filling space. And you've spelt directory & doesn't wrong in the para of text. |
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07-03-2007, 08:38
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what a pile of dogshit?
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: london
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if you take a look at any of the showcase sites (css beauty, css bloom, web creme, etc) you'll see exactly why its so bad. Get some inspiration from somewhere and try and implement it on your site... at the mo its hard to pick out anything from it that looks good. At least you have the right attitude tho I can lick my balls
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07-03-2007, 11:34
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Join Date: Feb 2007
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Are you selling your own e-book? If so i highly recommend removing the google ads they are an eye sore and they take from your credibility imho. Try a basic squeeze page telling your rags to riches story on whatever product your trying to sell. Not that great from a design point of view |
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07-03-2007, 12:22
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inventer of the left-hand
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Leeds / Lincoln
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To be honest, we are in 2007 and not 1997, that is really not going to attract anyone, if you have a look at any decent website out of the millions they will all have a particular style which is modern and works well, just have a look at the internet for inspiration, this looks like you did it blindly. |
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07-03-2007, 14:15
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Posts: 3
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That huge button in the middle is a no-no. It overpowers everything else. I think you should change the font to something else. You might try organizing the featured listings into something more pleasing to look at and dividing them into categories to make them easier to scan. |
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07-03-2007, 14:28
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Designers are strange :)
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Shrewsbury, UK
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Looks like a typical "We'll take all your money and *wont* make you rich" sites. Theres too much on the page eg about 5 million green boxes. Why do nearly all your link got to "#" no content yet??? 2 and a half weeks to make that is pathetic. |
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