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lucidcreations · 20-01-2004, 08:27

Guys, I've been stuck on this uninspiring project for a few days now and this is all i have come up with. Could you have a look at both proofs and give me a few points to give them a more finished look....this is never going to be my best piece of work

www.lucidcreations.co.uk/indexproof.jpg

www.lucidcreations.co.uk/detailsproof.jpg

Any advice gladley taken.

Oh yeah try and picture them bordered in the centre of the page.

Nice one

smallbeer · 20-01-2004, 08:54

I like them. Only thing that caught me was the navigation could do with some extra top and bottom padding as it looks a bit lost with the other "chunky" boxes.

oli · 20-01-2004, 08:57

Im not sure about the font choice for 'points protector',
The design definately needs some colour in it to counteract the black and white image at the top.

lucidcreations · 20-01-2004, 09:07

i know what u mean about that logo font, you know what these corp chaps are like thats our logo and thats what we want even if it sucks large cocks.

hmm, counteracting colours...hmm.

oli · 20-01-2004, 09:09

if its their logo fair enough then, you need something colourfull in there tho..

lucidcreations · 20-01-2004, 09:12

i could use your avatar and its still got blue in it......floating old man on a javascript loop. i like that idea

oli · 20-01-2004, 09:13

its got potential ..

lucidcreations · 20-01-2004, 09:25

okay heres a contrasting colour not quiet on the opposite end of the scale (thats a dull brown colour). Does bring it out a little and I've padded the nav.

www.lucidcreations.co.uk/index2.jpg

lucidcreations · 20-01-2004, 09:27

LOL client just walked in....."i love the contrasting colour..." haha ta oli

next time i'll just give the job to you.

oli · 20-01-2004, 09:27

a lot better

20-01-2004, 08:27	#1 (permalink)
lucidcreations Part of the 3 out of 4 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: cheshire Posts: 2,081	Help!! Ave a look at this will ya Guys, I've been stuck on this uninspiring project for a few days now and this is all i have come up with. Could you have a look at both proofs and give me a few points to give them a more finished look....this is never going to be my best piece of work www.lucidcreations.co.uk/indexproof.jpg www.lucidcreations.co.uk/detailsproof.jpg Any advice gladley taken. Oh yeah try and picture them bordered in the centre of the page. Nice one __________________ Jase

20-01-2004, 08:54	#2 (permalink)
smallbeer I Ain't Losing Any Sleep™ Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 5,240	I like them. Only thing that caught me was the navigation could do with some extra top and bottom padding as it looks a bit lost with the other "chunky" boxes. __________________ That's fuckin' ingenious, if I understand it correctly. It's a Swiss fuckin' watch.

20-01-2004, 08:57	#3 (permalink)
oli I Call Shenanigans™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester Posts: 9,651	Im not sure about the font choice for 'points protector', The design definately needs some colour in it to counteract the black and white image at the top. __________________ Linked In :: Last.fm ..................

20-01-2004, 09:07	#4 (permalink)
lucidcreations Part of the 3 out of 4 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: cheshire Posts: 2,081	i know what u mean about that logo font, you know what these corp chaps are like thats our logo and thats what we want even if it sucks large cocks. hmm, counteracting colours...hmm. __________________ Jase

20-01-2004, 09:09	#5 (permalink)
oli I Call Shenanigans™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester Posts: 9,651	if its their logo fair enough then, you need something colourfull in there tho.. __________________ Linked In :: Last.fm ..................

20-01-2004, 09:12	#6 (permalink)
lucidcreations Part of the 3 out of 4 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: cheshire Posts: 2,081	i could use your avatar and its still got blue in it......floating old man on a javascript loop. i like that idea __________________ Jase

20-01-2004, 09:13	#7 (permalink)
oli I Call Shenanigans™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester Posts: 9,651	its got potential .. __________________ Linked In :: Last.fm ..................

20-01-2004, 09:25	#8 (permalink)
lucidcreations Part of the 3 out of 4 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: cheshire Posts: 2,081	okay heres a contrasting colour not quiet on the opposite end of the scale (thats a dull brown colour). Does bring it out a little and I've padded the nav. www.lucidcreations.co.uk/index2.jpg __________________ Jase

20-01-2004, 09:27	#9 (permalink)
lucidcreations Part of the 3 out of 4 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: cheshire Posts: 2,081	LOL client just walked in....."i love the contrasting colour..." haha ta oli next time i'll just give the job to you. __________________ Jase

20-01-2004, 09:27	#10 (permalink)
oli I Call Shenanigans™ Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Manchester Posts: 9,651	a lot better __________________ Linked In :: Last.fm ..................

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