[Toney]

Originally Posted by dorian

- nice idea

- yes, the girl does have a nice arse - but the "drawing" could be better... the pose is somehow "stiff" [/very critical comment]

(what was she holding in the first place?)

I think the drawing could be better but i like the color, clean

[tomson]

you could just change it subtley - wrap the fingers round the mike a bit, maybe foreshorten her left arm a little (especially as her hand looks a bit on the large side - make it smaller and daintier), give her some long flowing hair. You could make it look quite different without too much work. I'd do something with the typography first tho - looks a bit too justified for my liking.

I like the concept tho.

[Brown]

Originally Posted by stealthcow

duno bout plagiarism - is drawing the statue of liberty plagiarism?

bad analogy, you've traced it, that makes it a copy.

Originally Posted by stealhcow

its not as tho i just photoshopped the image and stuck it on

no, you did it in illustrator, probably.

i didn't realise it was kylie when i made the original comment and without the help of stickman's cd collection we'd all be none the wiser. i like the colours and the concept, but not the album cover. if you're gong to rip something off, try and make sure its not so easily spotted, unless kylie is on the station's playlist. imho.

[dan]

Change that sash aswell, that'd quickly remove the parallels and beet back any traced look that may be there.

Or you could get your girlfriend to strike a similar pose snap a pic and tuse that as your base... then they could all lump it as it were

[stealthcow]

thanks for all the feedback, i'll make the changes and show you the updated version