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design2work.net · 04-11-2006, 15:57

hi all,

Attachment 2345

the company asked for something that will convey the feeling of urban, stylish, clean and this is what i came up with.... any comments are welcome. (the image has been sized down)

freelancr · 04-11-2006, 18:00

lots of whitespace next to the really big logo image, perhaps u should use it for the navigation

5P4C3 · 04-11-2006, 21:24

The site is okey. But shouldn't the site be designed so that when I enter it I would really like to get my hands on some tea?

And when creating square boxes in photoshop turn of "anti-aliased", wich is only needed on boxes with round corners. Now it just makes your site look really blury.

Noah · 05-11-2006, 18:35

The first thing that stood out to me is the dark brown - which, to me, connotes coffee. Tea is more of an orange.

and i'm all for whitespace, but that's a bit too much at the top there.

good overall.

wheedwacker · 06-11-2006, 20:34

I really like the person reading off to the right. However, the logo and "online store" graphics do not look that good. I would get rid of the store part there, and make the logo wider to fill most of the space between the edge and the person reading. Other than that, it looks nice.

design2work.net · 07-11-2006, 06:27

thanks for your comments guys.

forbes · 07-11-2006, 07:46

i really dont feel the 'urban' theme - i imagine your'e trying to convey a modern, contemporary, minimalist feel? i love whitespace normally but i agree theres too much of it here.

hawken · 08-11-2006, 08:29

nice. bit small though init

04-11-2006, 15:57	#1 (permalink)
design2work.net design2work Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: UK Posts: 35	Website for a tea company hi all, Attachment 2345 the company asked for something that will convey the feeling of urban, stylish, clean and this is what i came up with.... any comments are welcome. (the image has been sized down) Last edited by design2work.net : 19-09-2007 at 10:53.

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wheedwacker competitionmaster 2.0 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: USA Posts: 1,451	nice I really like the person reading off to the right. However, the logo and "online store" graphics do not look that good. I would get rid of the store part there, and make the logo wider to fill most of the space between the edge and the person reading. Other than that, it looks nice.

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hawken Cornish Pasty Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo, Japan Posts: 2,898	nice. bit small though init __________________ my blog & portfolio sexy combined package

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04-11-2006, 18:00	#2 (permalink)
freelancr Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 2,338	lots of whitespace next to the really big logo image, perhaps u should use it for the navigation

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5P4C3 Deathblow Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 354	The site is okey. But shouldn't the site be designed so that when I enter it I would really like to get my hands on some tea? And when creating square boxes in photoshop turn of "anti-aliased", wich is only needed on boxes with round corners. Now it just makes your site look really blury.

05-11-2006, 18:35	#4 (permalink)
Noah person Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 147	The first thing that stood out to me is the dark brown - which, to me, connotes coffee. Tea is more of an orange. and i'm all for whitespace, but that's a bit too much at the top there. good overall.

07-11-2006, 06:27	#6 (permalink)
design2work.net design2work Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: UK Posts: 35	thanks for your comments guys.

07-11-2006, 07:46	#7 (permalink)
forbes Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Belfast Posts: 824	i really dont feel the 'urban' theme - i imagine your'e trying to convey a modern, contemporary, minimalist feel? i love whitespace normally but i agree theres too much of it here.

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