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joeyx2000 · 30-10-2006, 01:56

please comment on my personal website...showcase of my works and little about me

http://www.joeycraft.f2g.net/

Paul · 30-10-2006, 08:39

designed in tables! not the best start. very gray, would suggest you be more daring and add a contrasting colors.

nice layout, but i think the pictures of you (about page) kind of look loke you took them on the toilet! wierd toilet mug shots. not really nessesary - i'd ditch them.

forbes · 30-10-2006, 09:49

your portfolio work is far better than your portfolio site. too much grey

i3lance · 30-10-2006, 10:38

Whats up with the map of the world in your banner? What message are you trying to give to your audience? I'm curious...

Your site is more like a corporate financial company's site than a personal porfolio.

Your site doesn't really give off any element of your personality which is something that is very nice to see, looking at how a designer's personality influence's their peronsal portfolio. If it were me, I'd consider revising your site mate.

The site is ok but as forbes and the rest, your portfolio work is better and you should consider (seriously) learning the CSS/DIV style of coding.

Change the colours to white/blue and you have a site template for the FSA or something...not very personal at all. If this is the market your trying to appeal to you can still do this with a different design for sure.

Check out cssbeauty.com for some good examples of more personalised portfolio's.

Sorry mate.

30-10-2006, 01:56	#1 (permalink)
joeyx2000 Design Diet Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 19	personal website please comment on my personal website...showcase of my works and little about me http://www.joeycraft.f2g.net/

30-10-2006, 10:38	#4 (permalink)
i3lance Read between da lines! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: UK, former Londoner Posts: 849	Whats up with the map of the world in your banner? What message are you trying to give to your audience? I'm curious... Your site is more like a corporate financial company's site than a personal porfolio. Your site doesn't really give off any element of your personality which is something that is very nice to see, looking at how a designer's personality influence's their peronsal portfolio. If it were me, I'd consider revising your site mate. The site is ok but as forbes and the rest, your portfolio work is better and you should consider (seriously) learning the CSS/DIV style of coding. Change the colours to white/blue and you have a site template for the FSA or something...not very personal at all. If this is the market your trying to appeal to you can still do this with a different design for sure. Check out cssbeauty.com for some good examples of more personalised portfolio's. Sorry mate. __________________ i3lance

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30-10-2006, 08:39	#2 (permalink)
Paul Junkie[scum] Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: location, location Posts: 1,870	designed in tables! not the best start. very gray, would suggest you be more daring and add a contrasting colors. nice layout, but i think the pictures of you (about page) kind of look loke you took them on the toilet! wierd toilet mug shots. not really nessesary - i'd ditch them.

30-10-2006, 09:49	#3 (permalink)
forbes Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Belfast Posts: 824	your portfolio work is far better than your portfolio site. too much grey

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