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competitionmaster 2.0
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: USA
Posts: 1,413
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what do you think? wheedwacker design |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 2,152
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Like the moo.fx stuff, shame you cant close them by clicking again - or you have more than one open. Change the font for the content though. Get rid of the prices, its vulgar to talk about money! Generally doesn't feel like its finished, or you rushed it, the content areas seem very bland. |
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Spare Parts
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Bracknell Forest
Posts: 4,931
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The white text sections need some space above and below the text. Should you slap your potential customer in the face with how they can pay you? Discuss payment terms once they have agreed to buy. Also I never hold Paypal out in front it will encourage fraudsters. About you page should be about you. Very little of that here. Values? Location? Unique selling point? A list of technologies you use to design only means anything to designers. Your clients will not have a clue. Also you do not want links on the arrival page to encourage customers to journey onward. Is the font throughout Times New Roman? On the Contact Us page some of the labels are Times, one is Verdana? Inconsitency looks untidy. In the portfolio I looked at the pets page, what a mess! Some of the labels in the big boxes are aligned left, some right, some bottom, some top, some middle. The small animal links should be in something other than times. Hope this helps. |
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competitionmaster 2.0
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: USA
Posts: 1,413
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It isn't completely finished yet. The content needs to be changed along with the fonts. The Pet page was changed just a few days ago to another font, actually. However, I am going to wait until that site is finished to put up a different screenshot for it. quote "On the Contact Us page some of the labels are Times, one is Verdana? Inconsitency looks untidy." I don't see what you are talking about. They are all times. However, I will change them to another font soon. Thanks for your help! |
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